Black Poetry : Riches spooky time scenerio

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  1. PurpleMoons

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    Not your ordinay creep


    She was no ordinary creep
    black laced knee highs, complementary stilettos on her feet
    A pair of leather pants that fit like skin
    If beauty was considered evil
    she would be thirteen deadly sins

    One could see her only once a year
    Women held on to their husband out of uncertain fear
    Children fled home before the street lights came on
    Men scratching at doors to their bloody finger bones

    Wolves could be heard howling with such a erie cry
    Owls would be hooting, warning all of her plight
    You'll be assinine fool if you were caught out tonight

    The very scent of her entrapped men in
    an enchanting spell
    She wore a 36D leather black bra top as well

    Her hair was straight black, silky, shoulder length
    She had a smile you could taste
    every man wanted a sip

    This was the night that made the undertakers smile
    Their cup would runneth over for infinite miles
    If you men ever had one unfaithful thought
    This was the night a lesson would be taught

    She would jump on her Black harley
    And believe me she road it well
    If a man silently lusted for her
    she sent him straight to hell

    Piles of flesh could be found all over the city streets
    and the only way to identify the body
    was from their blood shattered teeth

    So if you are a man
    and if you every looked sideways at another
    You can kiss your girlfriends slash wives goodbye
    and dont forget to kiss your mother

    Because on halloween night
    she'll be back to claim your soul
    and those dirty secret thoughts you had all year
    your life will pay the toll

    She was no ordinary creep!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww sis this was the best one yet....
    very creativity and i enjoyed this like
    a tale of the night
    Not your ordinay creep..sho ya right
    go head sis!!!!!!!! ^5

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    sound like my wife .......let her creep !
    boo ! i love da drama of fright night madness
    tyte hallo drop of scare....
     
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    whoa...da creep freak of da week....
    this was spooky....creative piece my sista
    you shined on this joint...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    oh my goodness...laughing
    sisterrrrrrrrrr
    what can i say
    you went there
    and scare the heck out of me
    QQn for Rich
    somebody gotta hold my hand for sure now:)
    very tight script sis

    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Sister Purple You doing da dam thing! Nice drop

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    Sounds like a cross between Catwoman and Vampira, I'm scared but some of the men might sort of like this....This descriptive flow was TIGHT poet, I could imagine her right now, but I won't cause I want to sleep tonite.
     
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    Thank you Mba! I think all us women process the ability to get our creep on at times! Hmmmm! She could be anyone of us here at Destee's, living the rest of the year out as normal human beings. LOL! :witch:

    LOL @ Rich! Sounds like your wife huh? I notice you were very careful about how you worded that! :lol: After all, she could be listening. :eek:

    Thank you Brother Khasm! Have you thoughts been only of your significant other this year? :luv: :bellydance: :danger:
     
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    Don't be afraid Sister Blue! However, If that special someone in your life has wandering eyes :eek:hmy: Make sure you chain and padlock him in on halloween night! :zipit: :grin:

    Ahhhh! Brother PY! LOL I'll be prayin for ya Brotha! I have to make sure you'll be here the day after halloween! :angel1: If you find yourself face to face with this evil being, :callme: I know alot of people. I can grant you safe passage. :wink: :lol: :rolleyes:

    Hmmmm! Sis! I think you are right! Just dont expect to see them again :run: :haha: the day after halloween!

    Thank you for the love fam! :blowkiss:
     
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    purple nobody can run from the underworld shadow of da death angel
    he's coming Halloween night ......he walks be very afraid & aware of
    his bite trick O treat ............boo !
     
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