Quiet Poetry Lounge : Rich Desires

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dedicated to my love, and to the loves across the world. Dont let the days roll into weeks that roll into months and years, forgetting the one, whose hand you hold.....

    Rich Desires

    Taste me, if not but for a moment
    For one breath, will you not sip of my wine?
    For a mere heartbeat will you glance at me adoringly?
    For an eternity can we slow down this time?

    The moon bid us a farewell as our shadows glowed
    I wish I knew the one whose hand I hold
    As we snuggle close between the linen sheets
    To a pregnant sky, to who’s sun we’ll meet

    Oh baby, I know work is calling but please don’t go!
    Were so busy with life, but one thing I must know,
    Grab me in your arms, and never let me go!
    Never leave me lonely, Never let me grow…..
    Without you……
    Alone

    Taste me, if not but for a moment
    For one breath, will you not sip of my wine?
    For a mere heartbeat will you glance at me adoringly?
    For an eternity can we slow down this time?

    :wine:
     
  2. MzCream2Sixteen

    MzCream2Sixteen Active Member MEMBER

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    SNAP, SNAP, SNAP!!! This is such a SWEET poem!!
     
  3. watzinaname

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    This was so delicately and sweetly posed. Beautiful write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Forth i taste of thee
    tis moment of tyme
    where we share our mental minds

    Forth thou breath will be of thee
    whom i adore gracefully
    deep in da slumber is our eternal maze
    together where we can glaze

    As da moonz drift goodbye
    one's hand is held up high
    as the sky scrap da sunny bliss
    cross our lines sealed wit a kiss
    as we closely snuggle in divine

    Even as work calls i'll return
    for your sweet instill yearn
    within life dat has us at bay
    yet in my image of armz ya body lay
    holding gentle to never let go
    keeping u warm and never alone
    here me here my song

    I'll be there through any storm
    beside ya heart my cuddling home
    slowing time so we may roam
    i am of u tenderly strong

    I'z here u , i here ya call
    sweet apple*pie
    my ' my' my !!!!
    Desired
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you very much. :spinstar:
     
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