Black Poetry : Rhythmic Strides

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just have to walk
    Compelled to cover ground
    My feet never touch
    Thinking of you
    Why I love you so much

    Long stride
    Strong strides
    Strides of purpose
    I walk to get away
    Get lost in thoughts of you
    Direction unimportant
    I take this walk everyday

    Smiling as I glide through crowded sidewalks
    Happy to be in this mood called you
    Walking and thinking
    A smile on my face
    Walking with the love of you on my mind
    Just walking
    Not really going anyplace

    Many days the walk can last an hour
    In so many ways it’s good for my heart
    Soothes it
    Makes it strong
    What a loving exercise
    Sometime the wind blows
    Disguising the real reason
    A tear flows from my eye

    BE
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Heartbeat ... you're so romantic
    this is beautiful

    :heart:
     
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    smiling

    at this vision :)


    A
     
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    ...do the love poems

    that you know only YOU can do!

    yes!
     
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    4ever Romantic

    You have the touch my friend--romanceflows easily fromyoue pen--CONSISTENTLY!--and that is the mark of someone who is mastering their craft--Ra
     
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    HOW SWEET.
    LOVE THIS ONE BABE
    :heart:
    Much Luv
    Nita
     
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    man this is romantic....When u really love someone...No matter how far you are they will always be in your heart.
     
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    To be so full with someone's spirit, that you are simply glad in them, such a richness to this flow. Great one to bring back versatile.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was warm & fuzzy any lady would love this here
    awesome write bruh !
     
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    Heartbeat... never out of step with L-O-V-E.
     
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