Black Poetry : rhythm

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by creator eye, Mar 1, 2006.

  1. creator eye

    creator eye Member MEMBER

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    rhythm u ask for
    and rhythm i give
    cuz if not for this then
    why do i live
    and what do i long
    for
    more
    more
    MORE
    rhythm!
    without a rhythm
    how would i
    walk down the street
    and place my feet
    one by one
    on the cold concrete drum
    left
    right
    lift
    my spirits like the moone
    lifts the ocean
    higher
    higher
    on the shore
    a push and pull u could dance to
    a rhythm u could sing to
    if u only knew the words
    the birds sing along
    la la la love
    that sweet
    rhythm
    and
    blues
    reds
    yellows
    greens
    flowers and trees
    all flow to a beat
    all grow to a beat
    my sister walks down the street
    and my brother feels the sound
    the pounding in his heart
    as her hips sway
    rhythmically
    God grant us peace
    God grant us love
    and God in ur grace
    give us rhythm
    i pray
     
  2. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow.... This was tyte...
    Flow on poet...
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo poet flow on. really enjoyed this write hope to see more of your work.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rythum is hot
    On this piece poet
    From God to the colors seen
    Much Love this drop poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was mad tyte right here flow on ya know poet !!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Creator Eye, you've made the rhythm ROCK!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice scribe poet!
     
  8. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight flo. I felt the rhythm all up in this piece.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow,creator eye.
     
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