Black Poetry : rhyme like a mime

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its internal

    U know every rhyme I spit began with some bs
    a phrase
    an its a freestyle from ther
    too much thinking
    hmmm....


    Well hers some mo

    Every rhyme is like a mime
    Am I not really touching the topic
    Is it lace
    With real thing trying to face…….

    Just a thought
    This is bs
    Credit mess
    Now I’m stressed
    I wondered
    How floks get c3
    Get is c3
    I wanna be a1
    Equifax ain’t equal
    Im only better than 2 out ten people

    Man I’m so stressed
    I’m in debt
    I hit a knee
    But still pull a ACL
    I can’t tell
    Im burning
    Got ……I’m in hell

    My firneds
    Who are not broke need I mention
    Banks send me threats
    Notices
    I got a few days to respond
    An If I don’t I’m screwed
    I gota tuition payment due
    My car needs a little work
    I’m hurt
    My body is like a pencil
    U know how the led comes out but it goes back in
    Sometime I break

    But..but I know its gon get betta
    Know what I’m saying
    Like im a come up 4 real
    Im a pull a stunt
    Swangin on boyz
    I see it
    One day
    Im stocking now
    But im stocks later
    U know
    I won’t let it hold me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    never be held
    dis was tyte flowing here
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    back to the top
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't let it hold you, the weight can get you down, I hear ya.
     
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