Black Poetry : Rhyme In C.P. Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Feb 26, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Black and proud
    My wardrobe loud
    I hurry up...
    To slow things down

    Tapping I'm happy
    Nappy heads unwind
    Synchronize and watch
    How I've mastered time

    Testify...

    Raise those hands up high
    Ain't no second hand
    In a Black man's eyes

    Jails are full of Father Time
    Get rich quick schemes gone awry

    This dimension tries to hold us down
    Put that happy hour in our minds

    If you're late you're fined
    Too quick you're fired ~

    I was inspired
    But then retired


    Darryl Abdu Omari :geek:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word word !!!!
    in C.P. time
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked these lines in particular:
    "Jails are full of Father Time
    Get rich quick schemes gone awry"
    Keep flowing with that quick wit.
     
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    Love the spin and the flava you put into this, my man. BAM!!
     
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    Since I ain't in no hurry I'll respond to individually...

    Big Money Richie RICH

    Slow down baby,
    I'm trying to catch up. THANKS
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Since I ain't in no hurry I'll respond to individually...

    WATZ,
    You are always there come hell or high water and I appreciate that.

    But slow down baby,
    I'm trying to catch up. THANKS
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GEMPIS, I have always loved Seattle.
    Chief Sealth and me go way back...

    But Dear Lady,
    You have given me every reason under the sun to regard the Queen City as being named thusly, in honor of you, a dear friend. THANKS ~
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweetheart, you made my entire week. I feel lucky to have friends like you - thank you, and much love.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    C'mon Colored People,

    Don't miss the Soul Train... HIT ME!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really liked the originality of this piece...very nice...
     
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