Black Poetry : rewind

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Oct 10, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just rambling here...hope you all are feeling it...



    let me rethink my position here
    as i watch you walk in and out
    looking pitiful
    is it my fault you lied
    is it my fault you didn't take this thing as seriously as i did
    i tried so hard
    to be what you needed
    me to be
    your own little personal cheerleader
    bobby socks with the ball on the back
    and all
    i was the one


    but i digress

    let me rethink about what i said
    our last conversation
    well somewhat conversation
    i told you i loved you
    you were flattered
    that was all
    just flattered!
    wtf!
    you told me you fall in love easily
    so what was the problem

    dayum, again i digress

    let me rethink why i broke it off
    you lied
    you're selfish
    you need to grow up
    i want you back
    but i don't need you back
    so cancel that
    i found someone new
    praying you don't see us together
    i just wanna know if you miss me
    is all
    he's not you
    but he will do

    let me try a different approach

    let me rewind to the first day we met
    the way we looked into each other's eyes
    i can't forget
    the way you made me feel
    when you kissed me
    i knew this was gonna last
    i just knew
    but i can't get past
    your messed up issues
    if only...

    again i digress
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl you just read my mind...
    i know this man..lol
    i for one love this flow...
    my thoughts 6 months ago...
    much love for this :grouphug:
    thumbs up on you hit right on point...
    so it wasnt ramblin ta me.....
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhh thank you so much mzblkangel, i'm so so glad you were feeling this. thank you
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your most welcome...
    coz it hit home
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had somebody once
    I knew real soon into it that it wouldn't last
    and she had so many jacked up issues
    human nature, true love
    why do we stay in situations like this for so long?
    I guess if we knew that, you and I would be wealthy

    stay strong baby
    be good to your heart
    much love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well pose'd and said !
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis...i'm so glad you can relate, for real...wish i had seen his true colors a lot sooner...it's sad when everyone else knows except for you...thanks for reading.

    $$RICH$$...thanks for the read
     
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    rewind... perfect piece. Go back to remeber what the LOVE felt like, so you don't lose sight of what you truly deserve.
    He will find you, when it's time...
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JAD68...thank you for your words of encouragement and reading my piece....it's far from 'perfect' but it is what i'm feeling right now. thank you.
     
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    a heartfelt piece...
    everyone has issues
    not everyone has issues galore...
    them cats are bad news....lol
    tyte scribe
    peace
    khasm
     
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