Quiet Poetry Lounge : Rewind, Caught in the Heat, Scene Three

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sauntering into the bedroom
    holding hands, so sweetly
    a short, tender kiss, in an instant explodes
    into a long tongue twist, completely
    capturing the heat that could no
    longer be contained.
    The clothes are slowly removed
    until only under garments remained.
    And Anita sings that it's "Been So Long"
    He asks if she's sure, her index finger drags
    down his chest, his stomach...pause ...
    she looks up at him and murmurs yes,
    and the reason is because....
    She grabs the waistband of those shorts
    and eases them down to his feet
    I love you....
    As her lacy delicates slide off he oogles the treat
    that he has been imagining for so long.
    Fingers feverishly appear and disappear
    searching, probing, the desire, so strong
    floating onto the bed, caressing,
    mouths eagerly experiencing a new flavor
    they can't believe the fire that has been lit
    between them, they can no longer merely savor.
    Maxwell swoons "Til the Cops Come Knocking"
    As two become one, she forgets
    what initially caused her shame.
    To the rhythm of the music, to the beat
    of her tune, he moves, calling out her name.
    Drenched in a rhapsody of each others blood
    sweat and emotional tears, a grimace, a groan.
    They shift positions carefully ensuring that
    they remain entwined, together they moan.
    She looks down at him, his eyes ablaze
    as the flame between them creates a dance,
    their own unique movement of syncopated steps.
    Bodily lust competes with the essence of romance.
    Luther croons "Forever, For Always, For Love"
    He is on top again, as the pulsating reaches a crescendo
    so do the screams they can no longer contain.
    The eruption comes, overflowing into a river,
    an ocean of motion, the pleasure, **** near pain.
    He collapses, in a daze, she releases the sheet
    she had gripped in her enraptured anguish.
    They wearily roll apart, smirking about what they had
    just done, then searching each others eyes for the languish
    of amorous feelings so explicitly expressed.
    I Love You
    I Love You Too
    Locked in the afterglow of what used to encumber
    the two close their eyes, and drift into slumber.
     
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    the clash of hearts
    tyte passionate flow
    i was in deep vision of it ..
     
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    Thanks Rich for peeping at scene three, where hearts and passions meshed, your support is appreciated.
     
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    indeed coz i be lovin it every one where 4 now !!
    c'mon i want more !!
     
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