Quiet Poetry Lounge : Rewind, Caught in the Heat, Scene II

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Apr 5, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Admiring the inviting table
    set for two,
    they both sit down to dinner
    and admire the sumptuous view.
    Yes, the entree looks delicious,
    oh so yummy is that desert.
    It's also the perfect opportunity
    for the two to begin to flirt.
    In the dim, flickering light of
    a candle he admires her eyes,
    as his hands slips under the table
    and caresses her thighs.
    As she smiles coyly, she gets
    an inkling that this meal,
    isn't the feast he's interested in,
    as he continues to gently feel.
    Oh well, dinner can wait, she thinks,
    as she decides she would tease.
    And she drags her toes up his legs,
    then stops at his knees,
    waits a second, then up those thighs
    to that bulge in his crotch. She squeezes.
    He sucks his bottom lip, just mesmerized by the
    joy of it all, she can do whatever she pleases.
    He feeds her a strawberry, the juice runs down
    her face. He traces her mouth, making her lips smile.
    Offering him whipped cream and her finger
    he savors the sweetness of it for a while.
    They dance, no music, just two hearts
    beating, lighting the fire between.
    He explores under her blouse, so soft.
    So hard he's become, hmm, could this mean
    it will happen this time? She wonders.
    She searches his eyes, she holds his hands tight.
    He is almost weakened by the desire.
    She is almost sure they'll make love tonight.
    The warmth of that thought captures their hearts.
    They surrender, caught in the heat, they are powerless to fight.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice scene
    likes
     
  3. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WATZ YOU JUST KEEP BRINGING THIS HEAT
    I LIKE IT WHEN YOU WRITE THINGS THAT DESCRIPTIVE LIKE THIS
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...you almost took me there with you :) ...What a dinner...well almost dinner :) ...
    this was/is a very fine piece of work.
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for your support mzblkangel.
    Mistaliberator, thank you, I just try to make it somewhat believable.
    Thank you for your kind words, queentswana, almost dinner, huh...lol.
     
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