Quiet Poetry Lounge : Rewind, Caught in the Heat, Scene 4

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scene 1 for us, scene 4 for them...
    Two sleeping bodies on the bed
    smiling in peaceful slumber,
    on his chest she has placed her head.
    Around her waist he has wrapped his arm,
    entwined even at rest, that's what they always do.
    Blanket barely covering caramel sweetened skin,
    revealing secrets usually hidden from public view.
    A tiny bite mark on her neck,
    in the heat of passion extreme.
    A lower lip appears bitten
    in the effort not to scream.
    The royal blue sheet is crumpled
    and still damp with raw emotion.
    The lavender candle has flickered out,
    and they finished that bottle of ginger lotion.
    Luther has finished crooning
    and mellow jazz now fills the air.
    The drapes aren't quite drawn,
    catching these two unaware,
    that we've even peeped into this.
    Stay tuned, this is merely a kiss
    of what brought them to a captivating bliss.
    Scene 3, caught in the heat, ya won't wanna miss.
    Rewind....
     
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    don't let me miss dis here heatwave
    lovin dis piece of rapture
     
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    Thanks Rich. Not sure if I'll put scene 3 out tonite or tomorrow, but it's coming, just got to get the right images in my head.
     
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    i'z be lovin dem heat waves so keep it smokin !
     
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    OK, brotha Rich, see what I can do. In the meantime, scenes 3, 2, and 1 should be around here somewhere....Thank you.
     
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    SEEK I SHALL FINE MOST WELCOME !
     
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    okay...i rewind...so i could find
    now i sit eagerly at the front of my seat
    waiting...
    like a good script..you've got me caught up
    in the drama of it all..

    (i have to come in this forum more often)
     
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    Hope you read them and enjoyed Rich. Thank you brotha.
    Glad to know you're all settled in your seat chillin with some popcorn sis. Thank you deepy.
     
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