Black Poetry : Revolutionay love poem....and I do love u

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Miss_EducateU, Dec 5, 2002.

  1. Miss_EducateU

    Miss_EducateU Member MEMBER

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    you only protect your own state of mind
    but, muthaphucka, im protecting
    mine own
    and believe you me, I WILL kill you
    FBI, CIA....kiss my ***-ATA!
    i will not seek asylum
    i will pack a violent, violent pistol
    and splatter your racist brains
    all over "Uncle Webster's" definition of
    ******
    Vol. 20, 1987
    i will snuff you for my people
    since i don't see a future for
    my black babies
    mammies with no choice
    step-n-fetch with no voice
    YOU MUST DIE
    in the name of resolution, reparation and revolution!
    i will release amunition of street brothas, up north brothas
    strung out mother-sisters, black crack babies
    and those whose bodies changed the migration of sharks
    and of course those who made it
    and they will say "kill that Marxist *****" that "****** *****" that
    "nappy headed ****** *****"
    and then i will die for them
    but as they die under your gun
    you shall die under mines
    amin.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well i sit back and watch u on dis one ...
    nice flow poet!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And the five blak raised fists for poetic excellence goes to...

    Miss_EducateU. This is a poem that struck the perfect chord in my soul. This is the way it needs to be told to the old and young the young and old. Brilliant!!!

    blak
     
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    "TEACH IT"

    Nice MS. E.

    Keep teaching and preaching the spoken word...

    Be blessed
    :toast:
     
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    BRILLIANT!!!! mammies with no choice, step & fetch with no voice!! Girl all I can do is snap four times for this piece!!Job well done!
     
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    I'll be the first to volunteer to be on the frontline
    Singing "It's Nation Time"
    Waging war against the swine.

    They won't televise this revolution.

    Peace.

    Harambee!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my revolutionary sistah... you ain't tell me bout this one!
    strong powerful piece here! :spinstar:
     
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    you!... took my breath away with this peace.

    thank you for sharing!! (imma go read it again) :)

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
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    This is deep. I love how you call it a love poem, we need u in the field. I can tell you'll be one of the ones to change, save, and take lives (whatever it takes). I'm down wit it, you a hero already, keep it up lady
     
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