Black Poetry : Review

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Feb 21, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She pressed the waterbutton...
    stood there in the corner ..
    with her head leaning to the wall.
    As soon as the hot water toutched
    her skin....
    the grief came in....
    and with a few seconds..
    she screamed it out.....
    An Ocean of tears ran ,slide along her body down in
    the drain.....
    she released the pain...
    ....................."the PAIN"" !
    ....................."the PAIN""!
    ......................the PAIN...!
    she cried...
    softly she whispered his name..

    After an hour..
    the water of the shower
    stopped..
    But the tears....
    the tears kept
    falling...
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    guys sorry i pressed the wrong button..
    the poem is not finished..
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yet da depth u posed was breath taking
    continue wit da rest ...........
     
  4. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i already submit reply... before i edith the rest..
    so this is the poem now....
    thanks anyway rich..
    thats sweet of you....
    i,m sad thats why i alsdo make these mistakes with the posting and stuff ....
    sorry....
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :( this was felt for real :( hope u feel better :)
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Better...?
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the depth of this you pose...
    i love it....
     
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