Khasm13 : reverse photosenthesis

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    Deep in da foliage of my family ferns
    My soul burns
    Is it my turn
    To feel this heat again?
    An uphill battle
    That I feel that I cannot win
    My kin
    My parental figures
    S’pose ta be act’n bigger
    In dis picture
    You know I’m with ya
    Both
    Cause I love ya’ll both the
    Most
    My leaves are start’n to
    Toast
    Used to
    Boast
    Bout what I had
    But each flower I grab
    Now looks withered and sad
    And each seed I sow is bad
    The autumn wind is howling mad
    And wants satisfaction
    For non verbal induced reactions
    In empirical form the theory states as thus
    Addition by subtraction
    Ya’ll can’t keep act’n
    The way ya’ll is
    I remember how it was back in da day
    And dats what I miss
    And I’m old enough to take a list
    Of lifes lessons
    2 mind vines don’t always connect
    in time’s essence
    and I hope ya’ll know
    ya both in my nightly bless’nss

    so please don’t keep test’n me
    cause I want ya’ll both to be free

    please don’t keep test’n me
    like I’m mr. nobody

    so please don’t keep test’n me
    cause I want ya’ll both to be free

    please don’t keep test’n me
    like I’m mr. nobody



    life can resemble the barrel of a sawed off shottie
    dark black and short
    all sorts of things happen
    I don’t fully know what happen to ya’ll
    How big
    How small
    And how it got stacked against the wall
    My goodness
    What should I think
    Cause in a blink of an eye
    Ya’ll are ready to wave bye bye
    So long
    And I guess I won’t see you later
    Was part of the issues paper?
    Infidelity
    I don’t know
    Nobody’s telling me
    What da hell
    Tell me something
    Cause it has to be
    One thing or another
    I feel like a boat drift’n
    With no rutter
    With seaweed spread on my hull like butter
    Locked in cold water
    Like a whale with no blubber
    My mind stutters
    When I think on this
    Cause of the days I miss
    The days I miss
    Are just simply dis-tant
    Memories
    The wild grass that grows within me
    Sends me
    To the uprooted roots
    To look at the loose soil
    Too late for family tree pursuit
    Gotta break this loop
    Cause I can’t handle the toil
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: whoa!!!!! Khasm, this is one of your best, brotha. I have never heard the relation between self and family done so well. This is on hit man, completely on hit.
     
  3. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace to u Khasm13

    this is hella deep...
    seems u dug really deep
    and simply let the pen leak
    upon the canvas while
    truly letting ur soul speak
    in each and every stanza

    so unique how u brought it
    had to read it again
    to grasp even more of what ur saying
    my brotha u ain't playing
    i'm feeling ur flow fa sho!!!

    peace & blessings
    nadia*binta
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh man this is so deep....
    this was like on point...
    being in da middle...of not was your fight...nice deep write..:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u expressed it so deeply well and left a feelin of tingles
    wow !! a masterpiece
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you were deep in thought on this drop warrior..feeling it much love to you
    Peace
     
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    Khasm,

    My brother. This piece is...deep brother...profound brother...heavy brother...10 brother. Keep up the good work.

    blak
     
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    what a view...and depth..

    the thoughts and emotions
    so perfectly measured, poured
    and stirred within this piece...
    this sort is thing is always
    troubling...Peace, Love and Tranquility
    ...........................Be with you!
    your words were felt deeply...
     
  9. triniti424

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    wishing i didnt understand...

    stretching my natural capacitites paper thin
    this predicament that i am in
    I can not get out
    of
    because
    my vines
    are entertwined
    in this family line
    of mine
    gaining my energy from the sun
    you drain your energy from only one...
    and I can not be that source anymore
    because I abhor
    this teeter-totter game of take and take
    until I can not make
    enough energy to sustain me
    wanting to stop this insanity
    it is worthless to make a plea
    to stop
    your effort is naught
    and I ought
    to get up and leave
    but I can not do to you all
    what you have done to me
    so though I stay
    and tough out these trials
    my fern will one day break away
    so that my seed shall never say
    I regret this day...
    no
    it will never be that way
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    my destee fam...
    you are all so dear to me...
    to levels unknown...:heart:

    thanks
    nadia
    mzblk
    rich
    blue
    ola
    blak
    sage
    and triniti...so right, it will never be this way...never
    thanks for the love on this one...holiday blues
    peace
    khasm
     
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