Quiet Poetry Lounge : REVERSAL OF ORDER

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    All night long
    i heard
    the distant thunder
    breaker of the soul
    like crashing tides

    sculpting the horizon
    deserted shorelines
    under the burning flame
    of cherry moon

    now the misty ocean air
    shivers as i rise
    to the mask of breeze
    clappin' windz with heat

    behind me a city sleep
    poundering progress
    processions
    of the northen cascade
    and easten michinery

    man has amounted to
    nothing more then a
    collaborations of
    synthetic whisperz & moanz
    in the breeze of darkness
    as silent to a hush
    of long betrayal
    through autumn stormz
    recite judas
    the bedlam of man's table

    the full body no longer
    connect as the mind
    of reversal play at witts
    of false taste.

    $R (c) copyrights Reserved
    2002 underground file
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you this was deep
    and i understnad..
    the signs of betrayal
    of a one thought friend....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes betrayal is the very stick in the back
    when u looking that very one in the face
    thankz for the read
     
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    wow, this was very powerful, deep..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sudden it's the blast of betrayal of whom should be beside u
    is the staber with the smile ......thankz sis.
     
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    Whoa! Such imagery, and such a message. Oh, $$RICH$$. :bowdown:
     
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    yes a first hand wittness of the very visional cast
    of betrayal by the very one should have been wit me
    is truely not ......false love , false hope !
    thankz sistah gempis
     
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    Reverse order of life & living !
    ya heard
     
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