Quiet Poetry Lounge : Revelation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Apr 22, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    LOOking this mornin
    hearing the birds sing
    reminds me of the pain
    u used to bring.

    how i would cry
    and stay up half the night
    wondering if
    u'd be in sight

    tryna make it work
    just brought my soul
    more hurt
    more than i , deserved.

    posed up like the
    thinker, deep meditaional
    sinking, answers coming
    suddenly fleeing

    someone calll 911
    come get this *****
    for i make him done
    put my fist down his
    throat watch him choke

    naw i'd rather write
    a letter and let him
    know i feel so much
    better with him gone

    when i used to think
    without him i couldn't go on
    now i'm laffing, togglin'
    between being in bliss
    and being lightweight
    pissed...

    looking this morinin
    hearing the birds sing
    reminds me of the
    happiness they now bring


    and how you worked
    overtime to bring me down
    you threw stones, i took them,
    i used them to build my
    castles.

    and when you return
    burned up and bruised
    i know you laff now
    but the world is using you

    and when you return
    with lessons you want
    to recite, messages
    from your new insight

    remember the lies
    remember how you thought
    stabbin me was so funny
    mockin me in front of your
    co-workers.


    yeah, it's a small
    world, where the circle
    never ends
    what goes around
    comes around....

    and we will, meet again.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    naw i'd rather write
    a letter and let him
    know i feel so much
    better with him gone

    By any means neccessary...
    Keep telling the truth, MORE-
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this...very thoughtful words...i can relate to this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed well felt i feel ya here
     
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