Black Poetry : Revelation of Visions.....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Understanding…..
    ….understanding
    I never felt what I feel now
    And I need you to understand
    My love is free
    …My spirit is free
    My soul is rejoicing
    …My heart is dancing
    I am a child of the most high
    Always on a spiritually high
    But the love I feel for you
    Is so divine to me
    For a blessing is here
    Your love have lifted me up
    Making me feel brand new
    Understanding….
    ….understanding
    I am not that face on the magazine
    Or that voice in the song
    Not that body on the
    TV.....or a story book doll
    I can never compare to that
    I am just me
    But….
    I promise always
    I will bring you up
    When you’re down
    Love you unconditional
    Share my dreams
    And make yours come true
    Understanding…..
    ….understanding
    Tame your desire with my fire
    …As we make a flame
    To a everlasting love…
    As one not two
    I will never judge you
    But help you when you’re lost
    Like kin we would be best friends
    Understanding…..
    ….understanding

    Free flowing of your love

    Illusions of a vision plays
    As my heart walks in this maze
    Lets fold in luxuries of our destiny…
    Mold in a perfect perfection
    Compassion-ally
    Embrace my being
    As I open up and give you me
    Flowing in your essence
    This is your poem
    As we walk pass the sexuality
    In to the mental stimulation
    Enhancing the moment
    Understanding…..
    ….understanding
    With conversation
    On the edge…….
    Feeling the depth of your
    Soul reaching into mine.
    Opening up a new world
    For you and I
    Illusions of a vision laid
    Within sight..
    Twisted in a sweet romance
    Far apart but as one
    In a yell of a whisper
    Within a hush love cries
    A sweet melody comes alive…
    The strength of me is you


    Just a little
    Understanding…..

    God sent me the Sun

    (C) 2005
    One Woman's Heart
    just flowing
     
  2. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see ya vision, mama...U paint the picture so vivid..Thanx for sharing, Angel...


    Peace!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    understanding ya hearts plan
    feeling the joy of warmth
    tasting ya soul as it drip
    embracing ya from ya sweet hips
    the vision is clear set forth in cares
    i understand
    knowing ya heart and thy soul
    as one deep and whole
    i see and understand
    the twist and it's romance
    that often leave me in a trance
    understand as i dance
    in ya radiant visional glance.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just flowing? Well, you flowed a vision of beauty and warmth in words.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww glad you can see the vision...thanks for the love

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww dance within my vision
    the warmth of you is us

    thanks for the love as always my Richness
     
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    Dancing wit my babyyyyyy!
    most welcome Angel ........
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes just flowing at times i just flow to release stress and well this was one of them moments my mental took off in a dreamy place...i am happy you enjoyed this thank you for letting me know

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Awwww sister this is SO beautiful :cry: *sigh*

    HEY! did ya miss me ;) lol dont lie smh LOL

    wow yanno why I your more spiritual pieces/peace are my favorite...

    because there is always a sense of divinity in them

    like you are writing from a heavenly inspired place

    and its oh so lovely :) :grouphug:
     
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    Hi Sista MBA
    this is a beautiful poem
    right to the depth :)

    Peace
     
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