Black Poetry : Revelation and Redemption!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Would it be blasphemous and even preposturous
    to say, that you are my "Revelation and Redemption."
    See from the day that I met you I knew I would
    never forget you , and doubted that I could if I wanted
    to.

    You see the Revelation is like the second coming in the
    way I feel. You flowed in and out of my soul until I knew
    I was real. You laugh You say it's no big deal. Around the
    world and back again , you loved another and her you
    wed but at night it was me you thought of in your bed.

    You see the Revelation is like the first time you notice this
    little girl was a woman for real. How you finess`ed me and
    made me squeal . Emotions taking over like a chemical spill.
    Every time we touched more in love we grew. I wonder is
    it the same for you.

    You see the Revelation is more than cognizant thought it's
    the memories that loving you brought, and the reawakening
    of unrequited love affairs that came and went to soon. Would
    we ever step in time again and be on time with our love.

    And then once again you appeared out of my dreams and into
    my tears, where had you been all these years, because when
    you left me I kind of lost my mind, I want to leave all the bad
    times behind, and here you are making happiness my Motto,
    in with a flourish and so much bravado...

    My Redemption is you ,out of starless nights and harried
    flights that led to nowhere but back to my own doorstep
    Then there was you again, my old lover , my dear friend.
    Gasping wouldn't help cause I forgot how to breathe
    until you embrace me!

    My Redemption is the lyrics of our Song," I remember you"
    and I fade into the nearness of you and you pass into
    my soul and my heart has lost control, until you hold me
    and telll me..."Yes I AM BACK!"

    My Redemption awaits your spirit as we take loves final
    flight, we know that "Practice makes perfect , since when
    it comes to love"!(MICHAEL FRANKS)
    I worship in the solace of your arms and I know that all
    my lonely nights and busy days , now have a purpose.
    You breathe for me as we exchange our vow on each
    other's lips.

    Would it be blasphemous or even prepostorous...
    If I again discuss that you are my Revelation and
    my Redemption....As our love resonates in me and
    our fates have been entwined you see.
    It was revealed to me that you would be...
    MY
    REDEMPTION!
    BJS(C)2003
     
  2. PurpleMoons

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    woah! that was beautiful msluciousb.( applause is in order)
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Purplemoons (applause, applause!!)
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah!!! this was raw!!! Good sh*t
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes I have been inspired...

    Thanks again, hope some other's read, I like the feed back and It only serves as a catalyst to be even more inspired...It's so good to get back to where I belong...LOL:D


    BLESSSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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