Black Poetry : reveal-ation

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Cia, Mar 7, 2001.

  1. Cia

    Cia Member MEMBER

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    My eager spirit keeps me bound!
    Within desired ties, my eyes cry
    Emotions my soul wont let go!
    Behind a name with paper and pen
    My hand moves as my heart dictates
    Verbs and nouns scattered in every direction!
    Except to you

    I know, I know
    Who would figure at this stage
    I would be wanting you
    You don't know me the way I want to know you
    You are over there while I am right here
    In my life living for a dreamed reality
    That I know will never be

    A man searching for the woman within his dreams
    I am here virtually watching you
    I admire your style
    And reading your words that say more than what
    Average people can see
    More than fantasy, your words are reality seeking
    It would be good for you and me, no awesome!
    A place awaits your arrival for which you must decide to land

    From where I stand I see a man full of care
    Full of love so much so he can step out
    On faith into his destiny
    Can't you see?

    © 2001-March
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOWW!!! This is mighty tight...I'm sure he sees...at least I hope he does...Keep the flow coming.
     
  3. Cia

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    He does not know and at this point I do not know if I should or have the desire to tell him.
    I will forever house the feelings I have for him; maybe it is all simple fascination.

    Thanks for the comments.
     
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    reveal it!

    my sistah! tight!

    CELA
     
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    you lift'n him up Sis ...
    him all those that read and wonder ...

    tight peace

    Destee
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...stepping out on faith" Yes Poet that is it isn't it? Very strong piece. Thank you for sharing.

    BE
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Solid,there's power in this piece....
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel this

    and being one who can be impulsive sometimes...(whispering out loud), at this stage of my life, "I'd tell him". :)

    This IZ powerful work; it's a powerfully beautiful experience.

    Thank you for sharing,

    A
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome surely he will know of such this was tyte .
     
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