Black Poetry : return

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nubian One, Oct 15, 2004.

  1. Nubian One

    Nubian One Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is the sin that keeps on sinning
    she cries her swollen tears from exhausted eyes
    gazing wearily at the face between her thighs
    as he eats away at the
    words that were spoken just an hour ago
    the "No"
    that really meant Yes, he shoots electric orgasms
    through her veins, intoxicating her brain
    with a stroke of his tongue, it has begun
    just when she thought it had ended
    the splendid reminder of
    how she could feel from a man's rough touch
    and dominating appeal splashes against soft walls
    like a liquid Deja Vu, his fingertips
    are matchsticks striking parallel
    against unlocked hips
    igniting flame to melt away
    that layer of ice his predecessors have paved thick
    So quick are the motions from her lips
    below and above
    crying with ecstasy and agony
    as she begs for mercy and love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte her yearning for love
    and the mercy of heart feelin da wells
    of her eyez with hope.....................
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I read this i felt a warm kind of deep... Good job....keep on scribin' :terrific:
     
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    LAVA HOT....whoa!! good scribe poet
     
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    tight scribe poet...enjoyed this read....
     
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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: Good Gawd...Poet!

    You...

    :weights: Are Goooooooood:weights:

    ...you just flexin poetry all up in here

    Whew...this was on :darts:

    I am in aaaaaaaaaawe.....

    May I please have an Encore... :spin:

    Pretty please...cuz this is what REAL POETRY IS... :D
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chocked full of expressive emotion. This just flowed right off of the page poet. Take a well deserved bow....
     
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    *smiling* Magnificent flow of
    TOUCH :)
     
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