Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Apr 27, 2005.
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WOW!!!!! This is so powerful, heartfelt and simply beautiful. This should be published somewhere. Beautiful Sage.
this was off the hook
and mad tyte sista
guess u write about what u write wow !
Girl...........the words, the cadence, the placement, the sentiment conveyed so well........it's a masterpiece. This is just classic Sage. You're amazing.
This piece....is TIGHTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.
What do I write now? mm mm mm
Where do I go?
What should I say?
That's deeper than what is presented on the surface.
for sharing your thoughts of a love lost.
sometimes i am overtaken by someones skillful display
whether it be in basketball, music-making or poetry...
i feel that way now after reading your lines...
a tru poet has a God given talent to make someone feel an occurance
when they weren't even there or have never felt it b4...
i am awe struck by your ability sage...keep em come'n
i beg of thee sincerly...
Well...gee...how do I respond to this, and not write a book. These words swept over me, like waves. Bringing me to shore with such heartfelt compassionate love, and taking me back out to sea with could have beens, and should have beens...and whys...What do you write now? If one can write like you, what you just wrote. No more words for something this splendid.
"The hardest part about being a artist is coming up with a work more beautiful then the previous."
Execellent piece nuff said....
You guys sure know how to swell a sista's head up and have
her all stuck in doorways and stuff, smh...
but seriously....Thank you, Thank you, Thank you...
and a round of *HUGS* for all my favorite peeps...
Peace and Love!
Your words are encouraging to me as a poet!
l like this one....
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