Black Poetry : Retrograde

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  1. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Retrograde

    The New Year’s found me in tears
    And she said to me what’s wrong sugar?
    See I’m having these thoughts that are invading my New Year, this new day and some new vibes
    These thoughts were a product of a crisis
    The crisis led to the urgency that stimulated my tear glands
    Thoughts interfering with my mental status
    And tympanic hiatus
    See it’s a new year and a new day
    And the earth just completed another cipher
    But I can hardly free all these children from my past
    I can hardly free all these emotions causing inner commotion
    Can hardly free all these thoughts distorting my path
    But like they said it’s a new year, a new day and some new vibes
    I still can hardly free all these children from my past
    Can’t let go that connection
    Stock with thoughts that can’t be erased
    Stocked with children that require excess lactation, depriving me of the proper nutrients
    But like I heard the earth just completed another cipher
    But it’s a new year, this new day, new vibes
    The earth just completed another cipher
    But still…
    I can hardly free all these children from my past
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya vibing strong yet gentle ....keep flowin'
     
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    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx

    thanks for the comment. Rich
     
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    read this yesterday. nice poem

    kinda confused me a bit but nicepoem
     
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    nice flow poet!!!
     
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    very smooth
    and I feel you.....
     
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