Black Poetry : RETIRE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Nov 17, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when ya heart
    can't let go
    yet the mind
    tell u so

    how can u
    fight the maze
    with da vision
    so haze

    when u put in
    yours year
    how do u quite
    when it bring
    u tears

    when the cloud
    is grey
    can nolonger
    play
    ya smile turn
    down
    to a ulgy
    frown

    when u feel
    your time is up
    and the body
    seem all struck
    set in a single
    mold
    tappin chills
    sadly cold
    how do u roll

    when u can't
    be of help
    and u let da
    secret drip
    u see da vision
    of many years
    but hold this
    deeper silent
    feel

    u know the thrill
    is there how do
    you really bare
    the stain of pain
    and all seem drain

    work enforcement
    u wanna do
    but deep inside
    ur feeling blue
    maybe it's time
    to hang up the boots
    and look back ova
    the years to say a
    job :welldone:
    get your final pay
    and walk away :bye:

    RETIRED
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte $$Rich$$. i think we've all been there. its easier to walk alway when the heart and mind r in agreement. much love :)
     
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    Thank u ya words of comfort means a lot as i hold them close .
     
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    NEVER SAY DIE...

    Good scribe!
     
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    Alright now, get outta my head, poet!!! You've tapped into something on my mind, not exactly the same as your situation, but similiarities are there. Sometimes, it's important not to let a single moment change our future. Always, we have to put our faith in God, and ask for help with our decisions. Peace and luv brotha.
     
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    I like this yes it is tyte :star:
     
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    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as usual, your poetry leaves me speechless.... this is tite and a lot of us can relate to it! thank you for sharing!!! :welldone:
     
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    thankz 1poet never die !

    thankz watz don't let da moments alter ya life ahead

    thankz naujae......happy u see inside the mind with tyte drip

    thankz plainrhythm really happy so many can relate to where i'm going

    y'all help me so much on dis ............
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tru dat :yo:

    need your e-mail addy for this joynt l gotta send dun..

    peace.
     
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    word up brutha check my profile
    thankz for the visit to dis joint
     
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