Black Poetry : Resurrection of a Queen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Wisdom7, Sep 9, 2005.

  1. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Laying here
    Weak and weary from the storm
    I hear the voices
    But yours I decipher
    Breathe, he said, breathe
    As I slumber off into new dimensions
    Your magnetic pull calls me closer
    Come forth! you command
    Don’t look back
    The time is now! Breathe
    I can’t see u, but your soul answers to mine
    Caressing me through this ionosphere
    U impart your lips to mine
    Resuscitating and vibrating
    Spinning our bodies into climatic motions
    Thrusting the forces of your cosmic element
    Into my vast ocean of slight awareness
    Twin peaks atop my mountains salute you
    Slowly moisturizing the back pathway of my lower mountains
    Rotating my heavenly body ever so slightly
    Only to bury your head into my earth
    Suctioning the waters to bring forth life
    Come you say, Come forth!
    As my earthly body quakes and trembles
    And my ocean expands and cover my earth
    Yes I cry! Yes!
    Sending you exploding through the galaxies
    Traveling far from the moon
    Shattering the stars into sparkling pieces of heaven
    Big Bang was no longer a theory
    And I was no longer trapped in this physical realm
    Whereas the surgeons of death cut my body into pieces
    The mate of my Nubian soul healed my dying land
    And breathed the breath of life into my resurrection
    Come forth! is what he said……and I came
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this flow blew me away
    love how it took me inside for a ride
    on the helm of a queen well done poetess.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i don't know poet but this sound like the resurrection of


    FOREPLAY

    LOLOLOLOLOLOL

    well written
    deep - (no pun by the way)

    and i loved it
     
  4. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im not too sure that i can
    come to words with how this piece
    made me feel...and if i did, it would
    sound as if i were rambling lol...
    but it had me feeling like a ride
    on the magic school bus or some
    sorts. I absolutey loved your
    whole approach....
    KEEP EM COMIN...1
     
  5. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich, Street Souljah and Mz Melanie. I enjoyed writing this one.

    And Street Souljah, whatever do you mean, where is your mind at? :jump:
    LOL!! Just threw a little duality in it!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See now you gonna make me put like mad errotic stuff on here. Got me feeling all funny inside. LOL

    Mannie
    Host and poet of the Verbal High
    www.theverbalhigh.com
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, you did throw some duality into this piece but, coming into your own, is sure to bring forth all types of emotions and feelings. I felt a mystical aura about this scribe, I really enjoyed this vibe poet of the week.
     
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    Earftones Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOoh Stop, Im blushing!!!! Wisdom7 that was deep, I loved it!
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:Queen

    You know this is Hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  10. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everyone! I hope it was a good for you as it was for me! <wink> :jump: Thank u for your support

    Peace and Love
     
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