Black Poetry : Results... (of Conception) ...Results

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Jan 15, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's an it that was
    and never will be.

    Dismiss it.
    Don't let the doctor miss it.
    Don't pretend to miss it ... miss it.

    Wasn't essentially you
    essentially a result of smearing
    - smeared as a smudge
    on a slide

    Wasn't aching like it tore
    its way through
    ~ heaving in recovery;
    not brown, not pale, not - not ~

    Not!

    Not someone. Blood comes later.
    Someone you made --
    denied.
    Not someone you love
    who died.

    Of verdant
    Is antithesis

    This dull yellow -- of walls and
    thin white gowns and paper
    blankets ~ sterile smells.

    Someone who might have - - had.
    Not someone who had
    light brown eyes.

    It's an it that was
    and never will be.

    Dismissed.

    Don't pretend to miss it.




    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2.


    ...this is one of those pieces that has to marinate
    on ya mental for a moment before you can actual-ly reply...

    your scribe is foreva&always tyght ta death!! :)

    as for the subject of the piece... all imma say is...
    i cain't relate... but i respect a person's right to
    choose. ya feelin' me?? (i know you are!! :) )

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I agree wit sunshyne !

    coz u got my mental working .......well written
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    Thank you much sistah.... I'm glad you are always vibin' wit me!

    (and I must say, I'm pro-choice my darn self) :D

    One luv.

    N2
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Good 2 know that this piece had your mental workin'! :lol:

    Thanks brotha! :)

    N2
     
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    This is fierce....

    Very real....very true to the issue.

    ova heah relating

    thank you

    a
     
  7. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    ****, N2! That was deep. Makes me think...
    Love your work!
     
  8. quest

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    approach with caution

    that's all i have to say about that piece it really had me thinking and i will be reading it again because it was a lot that i missed but that's the good thing about poetry. keep writing...lovin it

    quest ( ache el )
    greatmindsgreatworkgreatpeoplegreatpoetry:look:
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are right indeed! This piece is so very true as it speaks to the issue at hand!

    Thanks for the read my friend!

    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Danilyn

    Sistah friend.....thank you again, for peepin' at the flow here! Just sharin' some thoughts on this very debate-able issue!

    Thank you....

    N2
     
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