Black Poetry : Restoration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by amberly, Mar 31, 2003.

  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he engraved
    unforgettable words
    in my mind
    stained my heart
    with beloved touches
    unwinding baffled eras of bonding
    breaking the hands of time
    the moment stood still
    together
    we restored tenderness
    he whispered I love you
    and I too
    to him




    ©2003amberly
     
  2. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice!!!!
    Love and restoration... sigh
    So nice...
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now that is a very smooth read
    I liked the flow of it
     
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    IN THE ZONE

    This is quite a sensational moment, thanks for the "hangtime" of flawless poetry-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have a way with words!

    tyte.
     
  6. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for your comments
     
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    Cute piece.
    "Stained my heart" - I like :)

    *Emma*
     
  8. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You! Love feels great
     
  9. poeticdelight

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    i like how your work originates

    i especially enjoyed your piece entitled "Pretty" now that was really tight

    keep writing girl

    one

    pd

    :heart:

    also we welcome all of our newest members to chat, play music, and flow with us on open mic :)
     
  10. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright girl! You are surely growing by leaps and bounds.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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