Black Poetry : response to waiting in vain "flow"

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    light brown honey
    dark chocolate
    fire glossed molasses


    beautiful to my every eye--

    I

    be seeing you--
    my mind levitates...
    walks even--
    leavin'
    footprints 'cross my little mental mind's sky--
    mind candy* to my mind's eye--

    I

    don't mind your horizon--
    ...hope you don't mind if i'm risin' 'cuz...

    sweetheart...
    u have that effect on me--

    I

    be checkin for you
    around corners & down corridors--
    peering slowly--
    'cuz quick glances of you
    have been known to weaken me...

    I

    feel you deep in me--
    (can i keep u there?)

    i'd love to embrace your lips--
    caress your inner glow--
    & be the catalyst of your every accomplishment--

    sugar coated miracle--
    fresh summer day--
    with eyes like

    love potion numba nine (9)

    i be checkin' for you.

    (waitnolonger)

    wurdplai.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEANY!.....

    NAH-UH!! (nothing i wrote could have inspired this)

    it is impossible that "Waiting In Vain" could have had
    anything to do with this beautifully amazing & totally
    fantastic piece/peace of work!!!...

    (but thank you for being sweet enough to say it did!)

    youhaveonceagainmovedme...


    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    glad i moved you

    glad you read.

    sean.:p
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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