Black Poetry : Response to Single Parented Kid

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Leaky103, Jan 14, 2004.

  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    COUNT ON ME

    MY CHILD, I CREATED YOU NOT TO QUAIL
    BUT AS AN INDIVIDUAL WHO NEVER FAILS.
    I HAVE PROVIDED YOU ALL THE MEANS
    TO REALIZE YOUR EVERLASTING DREAMS.
    DON'T EVER SET YOUR GOALS SO LOW
    BECAUSE IF YOU WILL MY WRATH WILL SHOW.
    PLEASE LET GO OF YOUR INSECURITIES
    AND ALLOW YOUR WISHES TO BECOME REALITIES.
    ONCE ACHIEVED YOU WILL DISCOVER THE WORLD OUTSIDE YOUR WINDOW
    IS NOT AS DAUNTING AS YOU CONSTRUED.
    SO, DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR PLIGHT,
    REMAIN STEADFAST IN YOUR FAITH TO WIN THIS FIGHT
    AS YOU CAST AWAY ALL YOUR FEARS
    BY TRUSTING ME TO FINISH YOUR ENDEAVORS.
    YOU MUST REMEMBER I AM YOUR BEST FRIEND
    WHO WILL ALWAYS BE THERE TILL THE END.
    NOW YOU MAY ASK, "WHO AM I?"
    I AM THE ONE WHO HAS BEEN BY YOUR SIDE
    EACH NIGHT WATCHING YOU CRY
    AS OTHERS UTTERED WORDS TO MAKE YOU BREAK
    SO THAT YOU COULD NOT PROGRESS BUT REMAIN STAGNATE.
    I AM GOD, JEHOVAH WHICHEVER YOU PREFER TO CALL
    AND IF YOU KEEP YOUR TRUST IN ME, YOU WILL NEVER FALL!!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed indeed indeed .....
    the world to live by
    i teach my children this so they know
    keep flowing coz dis here on da real
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the strenght within will keep you strong...as the words of this flow rings with wisdom loud and clear
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...this was a heartfelt response...
    I'm LOVIN it :)
    you ready to BLESS us with this over the mic....
    PEEEEEEESHHHH :D
     
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    this was a sweet poem...
    i liked it a lot...
    one love
    khasm
     
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