Black Poetry : RESPONSE TO INTRODUCTION

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Leaky103, Jan 30, 2004.

  1. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I peeped your style from the start,
    the female with the cold *** heart.
    I watched you devour many female species
    and took notice you would eventually try to play me.
    The sad part is I treated you closer than fam
    but now I see you are not worth a ****!
    First, I want to tell you the man which you so boldly "stole"
    has a few secrets which need to be told.
    See, we always think the grass is greener on the other side
    but in reality it's always a figment of our mind.
    For in a nutshell, the man you think is all so great
    please note, a good lover he will never make.
    But, I'm not here to bust his cover
    it's all about us and not your secret lover.
    Now you know I don't focus on my outer beauty
    Girl, I have a Bachelors', Masters' and currently working on my PhD.
    Now, you say sports are one of man's superficial delights,
    but tell me can you provide half of my intellect insight?
    I need to let you know that I am truly hurt
    that you would spit on our friendship and treat it like dirt.
    I'm not about to allow you to break my stride
    because I'm about to set you straight with dignity and pride.
    I wish you much success in your life
    because now it's time for me to let go of this strife
    but I just ask one request of you
    and that is to yourself only be true.
    See you can never really love someone else
    until you release the anger within yourself.
    So even though you may have took my man,
    everyone's destiny is in God's holy hand.
    So, I'll end this response after my last hard cry
    and agree with Beyonce when she sings "it's just me, myself and I."
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    [email protected]..
    i didn't think you were going to take it there...
    betrayal is one of the worst sins
    a man/woman can commit...
    felt this piece all the way...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was deep felt every line
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hurtful situation described, but you still ended it with a positive note to self....liking this scribe.
     
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