Black Poetry : Response to ghost_writers "The Good Guy"

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  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hope you don't mind. I was really feeln' your flo.
    So I thought I would put my spin on.

    so you say you’re a good guy
    i find it hard to believe that the females
    keep passing you by

    you see I’m one those females
    that’s not into the “Thug Luv”
    i prefer a real man a good guy
    to give my kisses and hugs

    yes you’ve seen me in your daydreams
    and I thought, “he looks like a good guy”.
    i wonder why, he wont say anything to me
    i was hoping you would see
    that I was checkn’ you
    at the same time you were checkn’ me

    even though I licked my glossy lips
    and swung my curvaceous hips
    you continued to pass me by
    with just a smile and a hi

    I guess you thought
    I’m not her type of guy
    How bout next time
    you step to me
    and let me be the one to decide

    cupid must be angry with me
    or else he made a mistake
    I was to close to you
    for his arrow to just miss
    and not seal this fate

    i stood real still not one move or twist
    he aimed directly for me
    but my good guy
    just walked on by
    cupids arrow missed

    now
    i’m standing here
    with
    my eyes all wide
    thinkn’
    i must not be his type
    then tell me why was he staring so deeply in my eyes
    i felt a connection
    called
    you and me

    don’t need no smooth lines
    or slick rhymes
    just be yourself

    say something like
    “hello”, ”my name is”
    “and yours”
    “its such a pleasure to meet you”
    “care to join me, for a carmel macchiatto,
    stimulating conversation, some poetic collaboration”

    but instead
    you smiled, said hi and walked right by me
    they say a closed mouth don’t get fed
    i will 4ever be a daydream in your head
    if you don’t try to talk to me

    next time, I’m not waiting for you
    to holla at me
    i’m gonna keep it real
    and
    holla at you

    since your all caught up in that
    good guy attitude
    but if your feeln’ lucky
    the next time
    my thighs pass by
    don’t let the cat get your tongue

    look me dead in my eyes
    good guys can be confident too
    trust me…you might be surprised

    when you find
    i want me a good guy
    now tell me why
    my good guy
    can't be
    YOU!!!:wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice hit back ......
     
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    Nice flowback, 4EVERLUV:welldone: This sceneraio is way too true and happens more than one would imagine. Well, I just "keep it wovin" when the "innocent" one complains he gets no play, yet WON'T SPEAK. C'est la vie...live and let live. Do ya thang girl. Flow on endlessly, with ya seyyyyulf:D

    :shades:
    :picture:
     
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    check

    a thug can show love-have your checks redder than rose buds
    make you heart shine brighter than princess cut studs/
    good guys come in all shapes and forms
    loveless im unforgettable thats why its 4everluv/
    milk chocolate sweety i could be your butta love
    slash caramel confession-creamy milk dud/
    so why are there so many woman looking for what i posses
    i position myself as one of the best/
    a good guy that loves a queen no matter her dress
    my lips fill her middle like peanut butter selects/
    and i guess that every woman wants a man like me
    to make love take care of home and forfill there fantasies/
    a good guy
     
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    Tantrum....

    I hear ya baby luv no disrespect intended
    I never stated a Thug couldn’t show luv

    Just flowing with ghost_writer
    Tryn’ set the scribe on fiyah

    Check this out….
    I ‘m not tryn’ to battle with you
    But if you wanna ride on this ride
    Go a head and hop on
    And lets flo this thread on through

    I hear ya talkn’ telln' me what you can do
    Makin’ my cheeks redder
    Then bring it on good guy
    Lets see if you got the key to this lock
    Wanta invest in this stock

    Better be careful
    4EVER’S LUV is HOTT, HOTT, HOTT
    and I’m not afraid to pour it on you

    I’m sure the ladies are lookin' for you
    Tryn’ see what’s up with the good guy
    Who posses some qualities and capabilities
    Tryn’ make a sista fall to her knees
    Spittn’ rhymes like he’s got a disease
    In his pen

    he say he’s a good guy
    even though he speakin’ so fly
    my oh my

    think I can’t recognize a good guy
    They don’t only wear a button down shirt and tie
    they can be big or tall, fat or small
    milk chocolate dark chocolate too

    I’m not trippn’ on the package
    As long as what’s inside his heart is true

    You believe you’re a good guy
    Then make it do what it do
     
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    sweety my mission is to show you positions
    give you good intuitions make a love petition/
    give you love on higher hieghts 3-d-deminsons
    tell me what you want-what are u wishing/
    thug passion touches your mind body and breats
    hope not to personal but let me state whats next/
    ur sex flow has me on cloud nine-can i get you there
    get you to the windy city-i can get you there/
    im more than a good guy
    more than some text words...I
    am what yoy have been waiting 4
    calling your friends stated what you need and and more/
    baby you prayed for me and im at the door
    open just a little bit-sweety dont be scared-crack it some more/
     
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    spicy:
    My point exactly.
    Thank you for the visit and those kind words
    of praise.

    Much luv to you
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum:

    What are they feedin’ you brothas in Chicago
    That keep you knockn’ at 4EVER’S door
    Good Guy wanna fly me and explore

    The CHOCOLATE GODDESS with the HOTTEST
    Tantalizing, Erotic Fantasizing,
    gotcha peekin’ through the door

    Im not afraid or scared
    we can bring this hardcore
    I hear ya mission of intimate positions
    I will file your luv petition
    have you wishn’ for’ and missin’
    My tender kiss and more

    No need to call my friends
    To discuss how I will make you sexually sin
    Have you feeln’ like you can win
    the lottery

    $JACKPOT$
    is a taste of my
    SENSUAL BODY

    You telln’ me bout
    Ya Thug Passion
    Caressn’ me in such an intimate fashion
    You’ll be sending me packing
    back where I came from
    After I throw this BEDROOM TANTRUM

    Send ya body to a place
    your mind has never phantom
    have you on your knees
    BEGGIN' me please
    for an encore
     
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    sweety beyond the actions of a good guy
    a real man is here-hear my reply/
    im distinguished enough that i have diversified myself
    from other brothers that want you next/
    chocolate is so indulging can i taste you now
    can i show you things- can i lick you now/
    i real feel the emotion we express when we speak
    other brothers hate our attraction but I cant wait till we meet/
    4-ever my luv i got loving feeling
    its called deep emotion baby can you feel it/
    can u see my words are more than just from a good guy
    my words are ever-lasting never a good buy/
    your mister good bar is right here so what will u do
    come her relax your body-im here for you/
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tantrum:

    I'll tell you what I'm going to do.
    I'm going to hit that Mr. Good Bar"
    thread and leave some thoughts
    inside your head.

    Holla
     
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