Black Poetry : Response to A DREAM

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  1. TRUTH_SPEAKA314

    TRUTH_SPEAKA314 New Member MEMBER

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    I remember the first time i dreamed

    I dreamed of being in between thighs but to my suprise the first time was a lie
    the first time was a crime and a slight cry and what came to mind as i wanted to die because instead of thinking yes i was thinkin why
    I thought why is my first time with a well know hood rat but one of the worst kind
    one of the ones that stayed in the club and do the worst grind after meeting a dude for the first time
    And now here I am deep between the sheets that were the color of loose-leaf not to mention she had loose cheeks and she was a new freak
    And do you really think she knew me not foreal all she wanted was some new jeans a all white warm up and a couple of new sneaks
    I aint gone lie it was cool but i felt like a fool yeah i was strapped but for this i skipped school for a little action to my dissatifation she had a ugly face with no taste, no class or dough but a fat *** fa sho but is this the way i truly wanna go
    Do i wanna know she dont know my name or age she waned a nut and a blunt to blaze
    her older brother came all hell broke loose now Im runnin for my life with loose shoes and a duce duce tucked in the boot, next to the dice i used to shoot.
    Shots rained down and im wearin blue in a red town i guess i should be dead now so then i put my head down I imagined myself away as i ran from the man in all tan i headed to the hood but i herd we beefin with the scan
    Man am I damned to die for some *** and as i wonderd why i woke up my pen in my hand and on the pad it was a line that red............

    " You're needed to change the world and I wont let you die caused your special"





    and it was signed



    STEPH_IX ceo. HATS OFF ent.
     
  2. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow

    keep flowin and droppin knowledge
     
  3. gempis

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    whoa, awesome drop! :wave: welcome to the Destee family, brotha
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well keep speaking in the wisdom tongue
    i hear ya ......very nice write
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this youngsta' . Just wanted to know was this a response to my "a dream?" , if so thank you.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I likes this. Way 2 expressed yr thoghts. welcome 2 da fam!!
     
  7. angelicsage

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    this flow was tyte as ever...
    keep the ink flowing
    I'll be watching for more of you
    Welcome to the family!
     
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