Black Poetry : response 2 "time limit love"

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  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How you found me, you've found yourself and that much is true; just open
    your heart and let it flow the rest will do what it's gonna do. The
    captain of my heart and the dweller of my soul; I to once was lost until
    your love has showed me the road. So, I'll follow it until it may run to
    the end; at least if that should happen, I'm sure we'll still be
    friends. You're a precious prize to me who has brought great
    understanding; if or when this shall deflate then that's when I'll start
    landing. I hope it's not a hard fall, but I'm sure it'll be long; for
    you've taken me so high to the point of where I belong. How does 1
    prepare for such a devestating blow; my skeptism plays tricks on my
    brain, but I refuse to let it show. I two have questions of my own as you
    can clearly see; like if we departed company tomorrow, will you still
    believe in me? Or if my life had ended yesterday, will you fulfill my
    dreams; or will they travel to the essence with me and never become
    supreme? I fully can't explain my love for you, but just know that I am scared; scared of awakening one day and finding that you're not there.
    These are things I think about a lot, but I'll end this on this note; I want
    our love to grow off of peace, trust, and honesty, not just solely on
    some hope.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awe yeah this was tyte the mixture to limit love" awesome flow
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am really impressed at your flo cuz :welldone:
     
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    Tyte flo back choclatangel!!!
     
  5. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for all the love everyone!
     
  6. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew! that's some profound prose sista and I especially like that last part. Keep that love flowing!!!
     
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    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah that was tyte. Thanks for the response to my poem. I like the way it fit.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    felt that last line 4 real

    and yes love is hard to put into words at times

    peace poet
     
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