Khasm13 : respect heat holdas....

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  1. Khasm13

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    where i grew up at
    you neva knew
    if a cat
    had a gat
    stashed in the back
    of his jeans
    once pulled out
    it would leave you need'n a saline
    solution
    black communions
    inflicted with
    lead pollutions
    gang related executions
    issued out
    for come'n out ya mouf
    no doubt
    no doubt
    bullets rip flesh to pieces
    in a gun battle bout
    innocent souls feel releases
    as heat holdas recieve clout
    you neva know
    who's gonna turn the party out
    with massive gun spray
    it's messed up
    it has to be this way
    hot iron
    followed by ambulance sirens
    folks steadily dying
    and empty shells be lying
    on hot blocks
    most cops
    could care less
    less shoot'n for them to do
    in this giant mess
    black steel
    used to peel
    a cap back
    dudes be bust'n gats
    when they are as
    small as a knat
    think'n that they are phat
    for have'n a gat
    internal organs go splat
    when fall'n out of body cavities
    caused by gravity
    and lead poison'n cause'n
    multiple fatalities
    from societies abnormalities
    and irrational mentalities
    as the totals go up
    for ghetto casualities...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like your style...
    enjoyed the read
    very strong
     
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    You said it my brutha

    "it's messed up
    it has to be this way"

    Tyte flow...
     
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    Tighter than ell as usual, Khasm. Lovin this.
     
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    khasm...once again...you came with the real...you do that so well, don't ever stop. i loved this piece it was hurtful, but it's the truth...much respect.
     
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    depressing....but vivid...tite
     
  7. Khasm13

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    thanks fam...
    with my poetry i'm not trying to
    make anyone sad or depressed...
    i write the real in hopes that
    something that i write makes someone
    change what they are doing...
    i try to bring the wrong things in life to light
    so that we can get past it...
    i'm not going to sit up in a fairy tale land
    where everything is perfect...
    if that was the case i would be
    write'n love poems all day everyday
    but in the black community
    we have many ills, and the first step
    is talk'n bout them...
    sorry if my poetry turns off some people
    but don't expect me to change...
    until black folks are free from mental slavery
    and the pollutions of the soul
    i'll be on the dark side of the moon
    kick'n da real
    peace
    khasm
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dont change just be yourself...
    some have the pain about love
    so they write of a lost love
    or a new love...dont knock them
    they dont knock you...
    be who you are and let them be
    who they are...
    let them release as they do...
    never know it might be that one soul
    a love poem reach..
    brother you got talent use it
    strong and wise...
    not tryin to offend or fuss...
    just do you
    let them do them...
    hope no hard feelings...
    coz i like to read what you write...
    and i write many styles all topics...
    :kiss: just my view hope you didnt mind
     
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    u crafted a masterpiece u said it all here
    let it flow brutha
     
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    well first........I have to say your work is profound as always...
    in it's exposure of the evils of our community....much respect to
    you for that.......

    now I have to comment on the dialogue I was following...
    I disagree with you being on the dark side of the moon actually it's
    the opposite....because you have a message and your mind is now
    enlightened to our surroundings, the scales removed the veil lifted
    for most of us....we still live in the dark and thus......even though we
    may possess the talent of poetry and it comes in many forms many of us
    do not possess or take ownership of the knowledge we gain, nor do
    we take an individual interest, passion or responsibility regarding our surroundings
    but this is the type of the society we live in today...a society of individuals....always exclusive no inclusive....no diversity........and
    that's why Your "work" will always survive because it is a reflection
    of the times we live in....and that is constant

    Sorry for the novel.....I personally do not find your writing disturbing because
    I don't find the truth disturbing but it's often hard for others...overcoming blindness......is difficult
    Your are on the "Bright" side of the moon...shedding light into the dark!

    (sorry for the novel..........just needed to speak on this)
     
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