Black Poetry : Reservation

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  1. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reservation

    I know of him, yet his name
    escapes me
    The Father created him
    for my enjoyment and pleasure

    He will be my friend, in tune
    with my every thought
    completing sentences would be
    childsplay

    This man, this reservation
    for me,
    would rub my feet
    after a long day
    and seductively play hide and seek
    with anything on my person

    This, this here, man
    of no name
    Except, Mr. Made For Me,
    would speak to me
    in non-verbals
    and goosebumps
    would have goosebumps
    of their own

    His voice would slide over
    my ampleness like silk sheets
    and when the angels sang
    as we made love,
    I would cry
    out of pure selfishness
    'cause y'all can't have none

    This man, the one reserved for me,
    would be pure Nubian,
    from his thick lips to fingertips
    to the occasional ashyness of elbows,
    and smell like shea butter
    and cologne and some
    sensual musk that you can't buy

    And when the women jock him
    as he walks by
    exclaiming how good he smells
    and inquiring what it is,..
    He would reply, "My woman"
    She's my moon, my earth,
    my purpose
    and I wear her
    for she
    was made
    for me

    jazzymoonchild copyright May 2002
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, Hello and welcome
    dang!!...is there any more around? :hot: ...wow that one was on the money. I was sure feeling that one. Very nice piece thanks for sharing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte drop here lovin it u came in on a blast
    welcome within the family
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so earthy and full of love, what a wonderful flow. Welcome to destee.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well pose
    like this drop..
    lookin for more
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. angelicsage

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    Welcome Jazzymoonchild...

    Your name precedes your vibe, your flow...and your style...

    Welcome... :wave:

    Love this scribe Sister!...

    Great concept and wonderful ending...
     
  7. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: :jumping: thank you so much! I am glad you liked it. I really appreciate that.
     
  8. caramelpython

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    welcome....

    :jumping:

    I see somone is hooked on Destee.com...LOL
    See I told you that you would love it here nothing but love up in this house... welcome to your poetic abode. :shades:
    I will be away 4 the week but you keep doing your thing I will be here and there QQ'n around. :lol:
     
  9. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caramelpython,

    Yes, I am hooked. :shades: I told you I would break my wall down and post eventually. Glad you liked. :jumping:
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    Queentswana, Rich & Mzblkangel,

    I'm trying to make you veterans proud! :luvv:
     
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