Quiet Poetry Lounge : Resentment

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PoeticChi19, Oct 18, 2011.

  1. PoeticChi19

    PoeticChi19 Member MEMBER

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    Her Unforgiving Waves
    a constant reminder
    Of what's always wrong
    Back, forth she lashes
    Unexpectedly knocking You down
    you roll over
    Just to be attacked Again
    constantly crashing
    Over and over
    get up
    Walk away
    before She kills you
    constant as your
    Lifeless body floats
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    waves of resentment are like a storm that tosses us to and fro...never allowing us to move forward...always keeping us in turmoil. to those who resent us, we will never be "GOOD" enough...we will never be "STRONG" enough...we will never be MAN, or WOMAN enough to measure up to their standards.

    WALK AWAY.

    nicely done.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the creation of this piece ......just move on .......
     
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