Quiet Poetry Lounge : Resentful Compassion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mzpoetic8705, Aug 9, 2005.

  1. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are poetic’ly beautiful, for me
    To compare thee to a harp is of no thought
    You are a unique sensual beauty
    Waiting to be caressed by your words…ought
    To yield to your sly ways of approachin’
    These poetic’ly inclined human beings
    So let’s go back to the beginning, when
    Poetry was effortless melodies
    When we’d lie defenseless beneath the blue
    Sky, using the stars as our pen to write
    These ongoing sincere thoughts of you
    And I, would give anything for that night
    To last, if ev’ry short battle dies long
    When will these unseen tears for you go on?


    ---MzPoetic o5-o7-o5
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da compassion so resentful
    yet deep and sweetly carved
    inside the memories .....I love this piece !
     
  3. mzpoetic8705

    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK you SOOOO MUCH!!!! this is actually MY fav. piece...it was a sonnet i did for a project...and i spent a lot of time working on it...and i am glad that you like it :).....thanks rich, are u this NICE to every one....lol
     
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    most welcome beautiful one indeed i am as i am daily
    may the poetic handz continue ................................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yet another beautiful piece. Do flow on.
     
  6. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flows well and I love how those last two lines sound.
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks you guys...glad that you enjoy this flow....:)
     
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    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really felt your words here... this was really nice. Enjoyed it much!
     
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