Black Poetry : Requesting Ya Heart"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Slow & soft
    i
    whisper
    I love u
    many tymes
    all i request
    is yo heart:heart:

    u say u care
    but i looked
    everywhere!
    how dare u
    not know of
    my beings

    yet i caress u
    wit tender
    gentle touchies
    body oils i lay
    upon ya beautiful
    darken skin
    as u wallz ya big
    brown eyez into
    mines my mind
    spin and weave a
    web of poetic love
    untouched by hand
    all i asked was to have
    ya :heart: heart

    she smile widely freely
    and turn away
    whispered ....................
    my love i gave u my heart
    years ago u just forgot
    to accept it.....................

    o'h my beautiful one
    i knew i had it
    see i treasured ya love
    like an open motion
    of essence laced in
    a pearly black diamond
    so my sweet i knew !
    then ya heart be of me openly

    yes King*
    all u want was my heart
    so i give u all of it
    now can u comfort it
    caress it and baby it

    i shell comfort ya heart wit secret showers
    and compassionatelly caress ya heart of soul
    wit slow //sweet//soft touchies
    gently forever i'll hold it close even when i die !
    to my place in da sky ya heart i'll take wit me
    all i asked
    is
    yo heart!!:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    CINDY

    My heart i offer yet i seek one ......
    and the things i could do...wooooweeee!!
    thankz baby:heart: :kiss: :)
     
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    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: well here it is.... Love the flow....
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    Liked the word touchies
    ha ha ha
    Nice rythme
    Desert Storm
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    write...

    ...the poem, $R!
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Love...untouched by hand"

    Write the words Poet...write the words.

    BE
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay brother...a little smoother than usual. Nice work brother! I'm digging the change...or should I say the new

    blak
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    JELLI

    UNTOUCHED SONG OF LOVE
    I VOW WITHIN HEART OPENLY
    THANKZ .......SIS........A MILLION TYMES
    :heart: :kiss:


    D~STORM ........THE LIGHT TOUCH OF HEART
    THANKZ SWEETIE:kiss:


    Ms.Dlite THE POEM OF LOVE IN HEART FLOWS
    WITHIN ME AS MY HAND WRITE
    THANKZ DEAR.......

    :heart: :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEARTBEAT

    TOUCHED BY TYME WITHOUT HANDZ
    THE HEART OF LOVE SPOKEN
    THANKZ BRUTHA BE...............:toast:


    VERB U SEE THE LOVE SIDE OF VIBES
    THANKZ A MILLION :D
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving this

    smooth flow...and your images are indeed beautiful ~ such an irresistible request ... for the heart.

    thank you Richness

    a
     
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