Black Poetry : Repost (Breath)

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  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Breathe or you will die
    Says my mind to my chest
    As you slowly move the marvelous way only you can do

    Original woman must have moved that way is what my mind thinks of your display.

    To capture your beauty with pen in hand will take the skill
    Of a greater man

    Forgive me for not seeing what was plainly there
    But what I saw you in
    is the designer ware of your original day here

    You are tall and one look at those beautiful long thighs makes the strongest of men recognize you as an awesome prize.

    You are short with all the treasures of a women twice your size.

    You are big naturally and make no apology
    for you hold the secretes of a women’s embrace.

    You are small but never short

    You are young and perfect to the eye,
    knowing the secrete is to stay that way inside.

    You are seasoned with wisdom and beauty
    And because of the love you share, life has blessed you with timeless grace.

    You are of many hues, and of all,
    A thing of beauty

    Best of all you are You
    Women
    “Queen Supreme”

    And your beauty awes me

    Time and time again
     
  2. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    Poetic bliss. That's what this is. I'm still trying
    to recover from the sheer beauty of it all.
     
  3. lahla

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    I'M REALLY DIGGIN' THIS!... I HOPE THAT YOU LIKE THIS NEW PPOEM THAT I PUT ON LINE!!
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SuNNiOne
    Thank you for feeling this one

    lahla
    glad yu diggin dis
     
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