Black Poetry : Reply/ To Rich$$ To my Beloved......

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To my Beloved where have you been
    I missed you my Friend

    Its never been a day that you havent entered my mind
    I cant help but to press rewind

    On the love we use to share
    And I cant forget how we dared

    one another in our little games
    and I liked the fact that I could tame

    you
    leaving with you ? on what to do

    But then my game backfired
    And you grew tired

    of the way I was treating you
    and you left me with a dumb look upon my face a fool

    Because i took you for granted
    And now my eyes are all slanted

    from Missing you Rich
    Im sick

    Of being without my baby
    The man who drives me crazy
    I guess what Im saying can I be your Ol' lady

    Once again Im Sorry if i disappointed you
    Im Sorry if you felt the love I gave wasnt true
    Im Sorry if I had ever made you blue
    Im Sorry if you dont want to

    Be with me
    But baby I dont care if it seems like Im begging
    I just want you to see

    That i miss you
    I need you
    I want to make love to you
    I Love you

    Why wont you make the tears of mine stop falling
    If I was to see ya I would go crawling

    To you to tell you to stay
    And lets see this thing through for one more day

    Dont let this be our end but a humble Beginnings
    I told you once your like my Luck lottery my winnings

    Because My King whom I adore
    Please lets once more
    Explore

    The possibilities
    and hopefully there wont be any maybe

    as I wait Patiently by the window to hear from

    My Beloved............
    :smooch:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Under every written vow
    thy heart smile
    beyond the far and between
    as thy spirits mend and cling
    forth art thee whom adore
    all possibilities within
    as we grow as friendz
    letter pose in compassion
    in da ink sweet fashion
    glisting in air wave to thy beloved
    never have thee foresaken
    nor left to wilt, i so am in da garden
    above watching in keen eye
    my heart flatten in herms
    as the indingo beats musically
    thy love afloats as starz in da night
    and the rays of sunshine in day
    i'm not afar or have thee astrayed
    kneel not forth thy Queen
    but so asketh as it's heard
    behold my stance as cure
    sicken not for the heart is open
    O' beloveth , hear thy whispers.

     
  3. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now that's what I'm talkin' bout. Ya'lls collabs be straight fiya.
    wont say I told you so. lol
    Much love to both of ya'll.
    One love
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :x: That was tyte, felt like a lil hip hop tv drama playing itself out. :x:
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear the whispers from my window pane
    and the lonliness is driving me insane

    as i never heard from you
    i want my boo

    back
    so i can show him i wont get down like that

    anymore
    why even the score

    it pointless
    its useless
    for us to carry on like this
    i just wish

    that we could unite and be as one
    let the past be past whats done is done
    lets be a song

    that all want to hear
    if you come back please make it clear

    that if you give me this chance
    this time there will be romance
    and we can make up with our unforgettable dance

    as we rock each other off our favorite hits
    it wont be one bit

    of arguing but be some loving
    its gonna be hotter than a oven

    as i once again be with

    My beloved...
    .......
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Lonely be not for my heart is near
    ready to caress and kiss thy tear
    i am that i am and above
    the one of true deep love
    no score kept just broken lines
    but all will mend in due time
    for da romance and happiness dance
    feel da warmth in thy stance
    never left nor foresaken
    O' my beloved it's all in da making
    nor is there a deaf ear
    i whisper in tender loving care
    light da fire , let it blaze
    so the mixing of what is craved
    and once again from deep within
    da letter has made it's home
    as i read and slide along
    feeling da motion of embracing tone
    to set off a rapid treat from da beckon song
    journey da moment of time
    because ur my sweet sunshine
    shell we !
     
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    Rich the love that flo's from me
    I cant wont let it be

    without a soul
    I felt i havent as your woman reached the goal

    of winning you back into my life
    i guess the thought of me becoming your life

    is gone
    so tired of being alone
    so tired of me waiting by the phone

    why did it have to be this way
    im so sick of this day

    why must my selfishness gets the best of me
    let's we

    im glad to know im still your sunshine
    i promise to give you sweet divine

    as i want to show you love true devotion
    our bodies will once again move in motion

    to the beat thats been laid before
    let's strive for more

    and be the best
    put the past to rest

    as you are to become

    My Beloved..............
    :hearts2:
     
  8. $$RICH$$

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    Ya voice like ripple
    to my soul
    and a warmth
    touching as gold
    beyond what once was
    to a new day of sweet love
    through thy spirit call
    no need to wait any longer
    this thing gotten stronger
    like two doves on a fiddle
    and when we meet in da middle
    only thy beloveth can fill
    as all the rest
    been put to test
    only thing left
    is my sweet humble caress.....

    Another page turned
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please forgive me

    $$RICH$$ and Nevar, that piece hit home. I'm sitting here in tears cuz I'm feeling it to the core of my sole. I hope I am not breaking any rules of the community but after reading that I could not help but share. Nevar I felt every word as if they were my own. You guys are awesome "alone" and "2gether". HELLA SCRIBE!!!

    THE LOVE OF MY LIFE

    I HAD THE LOVE OF MY LIFE COME TO ME.
    SOMETHING I ALWAYS DREAMED OF,
    BUT NEVER THOUGHT IT WOULD BE.
    AT FIRST I WAS HESITANT TO RECEIVE HIS GIFT,
    BUT HIS LOVE WAS SO AMAZING I COULD NOT RESIST.
    I LET HIM INSIDE OF MY HEART,
    I THOUGHT I WAS READY FOR THIS NEW AND WONDERFUL EXPERIENCE
    THAT WAS ABOUT TO START.
    THE LOVE OF MY LIFE WAS ALWAYS GOOD TO ME.
    HE LOVED ME TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY.
    EVERYDAY I ASKED MY SELF, “IS THIS REALLY HAPPENING TO ME”
    THE LOVE OF MY LIFE NEVER ASKED MUCH OF ME.
    THEN WHY AM I ALONE, SAD, AND LONGING TO BE,
    WITH THE MAN THAT LOVED ME SO DEARLY.
    I DID NOT KEEP MY WORD, I DID NOT MAKE HIM SEE,
    THAT HE IS TRULY THE ONE AND ONLY MAN FOR ME.
    MY ACTIONS DID NOT DUPLICATE MY WORDS AND HE GOT TIRED.
    AND DECIDED TO FREE HIMSELF OF ME.
    NOW I WAKE UP TO THIS HELL THAT IS NOW MY LIFE.
    TRYING TO FIGURE OUT IF I WILL EVER SEE DAY LIGHT.
    BECAUSE I AM SO DARK INSIDE.
    ITS MORE THAN A NOTION TO MAKE IT THROUGHT THE DAY.
    I CAN EAT, SLEEP, OR CONCENTRATE,
    ON THE THINGS I NEED TO.
    BECAUSE MY HEART IS ACHING AND YEARING,
    FOR YOU KNOW WHO…
    A DAY HASN’T WENT BY THAT MY EYES STAY DRY.
    I CRY, I CRY, AND I CRY.
    I THINK THE LOVE OF MY LIFE IS OVER ME.
    BUT I CAN’T SAY THE SAME,
    BECAUSE WHEN I AM LUCKY ENOUGH TO GET SOME SLEEP.
    I WAKE UP CALLING HIS NAME.
    I KNOW HE WON’T ANSWER, BUT I IN MY SLEEP,
    THE LOVE OF MY LIFE IS LAYING NEXT TO ME.
    HIS PHOTOS ARE STILL ON THE SHELF.
    I CANT BRING MY SELF TO REMOVE THEM.
    BECAUSE THEY ARE ALL I HAVE LEFT.
    THE PHOTOS AND THE MEMORIES,
    OF HOW HE WAS THE ONLY MAN WHO REALLY LOVED ME.
    I STILL COUNT THE DAYS, WEEKS, AND MONTHS,
    SINCE THE LOVE MY LIFE CANCELED ME.
    THE PAIN OF LOSING HIM IS STILL FRESH INSIDE OF ME.
    AS IF IT HAPPENED TODAY.
    THE THINGS I DID, LET HIM DOWN,
    AND HE DID NOT SEE HOW, IF I REALLY LOVED HIM,
    I WOULD LET THOSE THINGS COME ABOUT.
    HE HAS A VALID POINT,
    SOMETHING AT FIRST I COULD NOT SEE.
    BUT EVERY DAY IS A NEW OPPORTUNITY,
    AND I AM PREPARING MYSELF FOR THE REMOTE
    CHANCE AND POSSIBILITY THAT HE MIGHT FORGIVE ME,
    AND LET ME GIVE HIM WHAT I DID NOT,
    WHEN HE GAVE IT TO ME.
     
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    Renew thy self to love again
    surely he will re-enter ....i can feel u on every stroke of da pen
     
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