Quiet Poetry Lounge : Reply/I cant be him/only me...........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I understand that you can't be like him
    But you must know the love I use to feel for him is dim

    I'm sorry if I ever threw him up when we have our downs
    I'm sorry baby for all the unneccesary frowns
    Didn't mean to take your heart through town

    Baby the rain that has fallen upon us has to end
    I so want for us to be back as friend

    And let the romance we once shared shine through
    Boy it isn't hard for me to utter the words I love you

    No matter what I do I will continue to make you understand
    Boy you are my man
    Please take me by the hand

    Daddy as I lead you once again into the bedroom of ours
    As we devour

    Each other
    So we can engage further

    Into pleasure no other knows
    I want to show

    You that your my everything
    I want to let the whole world know you make my soul sing
    And to you I'll bring

    You everything I have to give
    I live

    for us
    I'll breathe for us
    I'll be strong for us

    Since I come to my senses that

    You cant be him but only you.................
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'm only me, now u see
    i can't be he, like it's a we

    but u and me can vent deep
    to something very sweet

    i'm only me , i can't be he
    what i bring is my own treat

    of compassion & caress
    words of love through confess

    secrets shared what hearts bare
    under the ripple and silent stare

    Now u know i can never be
    the past of he just the beginning of me

    taking it too a we
    to be and feel happily

    may da friendship rise
    to the hope and lovin surprise
    as i river deeper into ya beautiful eye
    i can only be me ........................

    Tyte poetic drop on da come back.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reminds me of that saying to thine own self be true. Enjoyed this poetic scenerio, and a very nice flo back by Rich.
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baby sometimes in my imperfect way
    sometimes the words that come out I dont mean to say
    i am grateful to this day

    that you took a chance
    even tho' i havent been the kind of woman in this romance

    sometimes its us women that drive our man away
    and to leave us pondering on the day

    that you walked out on us
    there is no need for me to fuss
    or try to discuss

    because you made up your mind
    and im elated your giving me the time

    to do right by you
    I promise I wont do

    the same thing again
    I love you my lover and friend

    as I come to the conclusion

    that your not him but only you...........
     
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    It is me , never he
    who gives thy love
    only to thee

    one who weather the storm
    bring sweetness from da norm
    from da day i was born

    I know ya heart and thy soul
    ya words links like solid gold
    as it unfold and mold

    the true beauty of a new start
    shell we dance in the radiant glow
    and work our feet cross da floor
    my heart is now your open door
    come in sweet lady , come in !
     
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