Quiet Poetry Lounge : Reply from a Real Man

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticnite, Feb 15, 2004.

  1. poeticnite

    poeticnite New Member MEMBER

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    Well I am glad you don’t tend to fall for the game
    But don’t think my feelings for you are all lies
    And just because I say you look nice in that dress
    Doesn’t mean I’m trying to slide up your thighs
    Can you accept a man who always admires your beauty
    The beauty that makes up your soul
    Can you understand the reason I make love to you
    Is because your love always makes me whole
    I know you’re not perfect, neither am I
    But don’t treat me like the men in your past
    I am sorry they hurt you, and left you alone
    But I want our love to last
    I will always love you, in spite of your faults
    I will love you for the woman you are
    You never have to worry about anyone else
    You are all the woman I need by far
    I can’t say all your nites will be poeticnites
    Or that the days will always be good
    I can only promise to be always be there
    And love you the way a real man should
    I will be all the man you need me to be
    I will give my entire life to only you
    I will be the King that serves his Queen
    If you take this ring and simply say I do​
     
  2. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A real man indeed...

    Thank you for this
    love "peace"
    Brother King Poet,
    There is nothing like
    a for real true love
    from a for real true man.
    I likes how you express ya' self :wink:


    Much Peace,
    Akilah :spinstar:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this piece from a real man to a real woman, keep writing.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop ya pen is just awesome
    flow on
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this is a flow from a real man...this is nice..love of you reach from the heart and created this art ...nice drop..nice everything.:) feeling this flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    This piece was AWESOME!.....I loved the whole of it but these lines spoke the loudest to me.

    You're an "ALL IN" kinda brotha....and IN for the LONG HAUL! :toast:
     
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