Black Poetry : replete* (inspired by GA_Sunshyne

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean lay replete.

    universes above and below he keep a keepin' on--
    but he--
    can't do much but lie awake at night--
    he count creases in the ceilin' and--
    speak your name thou dem dark hours--
    he lay him head back--
    mind heavy with you and
    dream of yo lips kissin' him where--
    dreams are whispered--
    and kept secret--
    he see you sleepin' in his mental--
    and smile stars across him face--

    juss glad u can ress--

    he don't be tired eitha--
    he juss lay replete--
    he feels july
    restin' next to him when he feel you there
    you and he salsa on the roof in him mind--
    he daydream you
    hopin' you daydream him
    hopin' you long for him
    hopin' you reach for him
    anticipatin' da next *butterfly kiss*

    an' replete in the same head--
    you sleep an' he--
    grabs popcorn--watchin' yo dreams
    fascinated wit every alla you--

    him da ocean
    she da moon

    unparalled pull*
    and he come eve'ytime
    in dreams--

    thoo it all...

    him lay replete like--
    he ain't even thinkin'.



    sean.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL NOW!!

    WHEN THEY TALK ABOUT
    BEAUTIFUL STUFF HERE IT IS
    MAN I LOVE THIS ONE TOO DA MAX
    10+:toast:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seany!...

    .... Wow!!
    (i remember you asking me about the word "replete") :)

    i'm blown away by your artistry. you constant-ly amaze me...
    & make my heart smile... like that tyme when it rained & the
    Sun still Shyned. :wink:

    Thank You for This.

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving the love

    u guys exempli-fy


    luv y'all


    sean.
     
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