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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through my pen
    it once seem so
    closely through
    da misty scrubs
    i could taste the
    juices flowing down
    my eager face long
    before i fell da creepin
    midst da shade light
    within my beings was
    and love which lit da
    way to your heart and
    the foot print is preserved
    in your head my voice
    still can be heard clearly
    but sadness now defeat
    threaten to overwhelm
    da vestiges
    with ink ebbing and flowin
    staining the grain of sand
    i left behind every notion
    on my way to victory
    full of image and shadow
    vision and memories
    will it be enough for me
    to savor like water to a
    thirsty child how i remember
    da sweet victory was
    in place the sunshine i fine
    my path to lead deep inside
    i know the joy so once
    again i strive to this glory
    this place and the honor
    of acceptance & serenity
    the blistof ink leaks in
    matter, wisdom, pride
    the color unseen untouched
    and unheard of by multi tones
    bring sweet music to ear
    and awaken da blind eyez

    my body maybe replace'd
    my meaning maybe forgotten
    but my love can't be replace'd
    u may fine the talk joyful
    but ya heart will be painful
    and once vanish so will da
    light of victory
    my journey is now northwest
    to primetime a ride into the
    unknown i must go alone ....
    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :heart: :new: :heart: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was so deep but yet i can feel it and hear it so clear....
    i love when u go mental deep...this was a mental crusher....
    this was posed so correct and tight .... :blush:

    sometimes we have to take that inside journey alone
    to reflect and just have that inner peace

    :heart:
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when we move in a motion sometime the beckon call is
    for one so my time has finally came to journey deeper
    and alone i must go to bring forth da glory of reasons
    thank u sistah Angel for this visit of takeoff !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome.....this peace got me...and i am so feeling it
    thank you for flowing it!!!!

    :love:
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed on a journey alone now !
     
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    Unless you search your heart thoroughly, the journey will seem endless, for you will keep needing to renew your inward journey. You know what's best for you, may your solo journey be fruitful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THANK U WATZ AND UR RIGHT DEEP INSIDE I KNOW MY PLACE
     
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    Sounds like you're starting off on the right foot then brotha....
     
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    WOW! *speechless*
     
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    indeed watz indeed as i now start my journey

    hey toylin thankz for the stop to my send off on a new journey!
     
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