Black Poetry : Replace the Sun

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, May 29, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I ride on the endings of
    your beginnings of pleasure

    I enter you through 8 million
    doorways to exit through your
    skin pores and
    .......................dance with the suns rays
    and record the replays of
    your vibrations from now 'til
    next Sunday

    I enter you by tasting you
    and playing in your funbox
    with the tip of my tongue 'til
    I'm mentally sprung so I can
    ache for you when your not around

    Playing while being serious downtown
    'til I get up to get down
    only makes you dig your nails in my shoulders more

    pain can bring a euphoric feeling
    and I ride high on neon clouds
    and kick the dark into the stars pockets
    to be locked away for eons
    until you rise and replace the Sun

    and your moans tell me that your
    on your way...


    (c)2002 blakverb
     
  2. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this...

    "I enter you by tasting you
    and playing in your funbox
    with the tip of my tongue 'til
    I'm mentally sprung so I can
    ache for you when your not around"

    now that's what I'm talkin bout'...

    mentally sprung and ache'n 4 more of yur scrybe!!!!!

    great work blak!:toast:
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sensuous and Provacative, but tasteful!

    Well said brotha poet! Done with style and class...very:hot: :hot: :hot:
    Blessings on Ya House!
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    *singing it must be love by Brian McKnight* :luv:

    excellent piece blak

    pd
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my royal BLaK-NeSs.


    ...do this mean you back?!
    ''cause it sho sound like yous back! :lol:

    i am lovin' your flow... fa sho! it's like i always
    say... you are fantastic when you do other
    kinds of poetry... but your love/erotica it makes
    a sista weak, man!! :D this be a "10"... from
    now til next sunday!! :)

    :heart: itsallLove, chile! (umm hmm dats right!)

    elayne.
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Up from the basement...

    It just feels soul-good to go back and take in the classics. This is sure nuff good stuff!


    Feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
  7. Ikoro

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    What is this man? This poet? This master of words and lyrics.

    Goodness, gracious me! This was just legit!

    One.

    - Ikoro
     
  8. epiphany

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    Wow, my...my...my....is all I'm gon say.....Blakverb.



    epiphany:heart:
     
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