Black Poetry : Repetitious Joy

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, May 9, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Slow mix a vibe of sensual joy

    to soothe the hunger in your mind

    Reiterate endlessly the {you and me}

    that makes our bliss so {mellow}ly nice

    Duplicate on the real the recurrence

    of pure unadulterated ecstasy defined

    Reciprocate the reciprocity in me that

    replicates two souls bound and intertwined

    Hear the reverberation of superb

    lyrical and spiritual repetitious joy

    I echo your name in my mental

    so sweet and delectably fine

    Please hurt me slow and passionately

    for a thousand lifetimes to come

    Repeatedly the joy of me makes

    love to your mind with silent whispers

    Devouring the words we breathe so

    heavenly and earthly divine

    This groove you exude has me moved

    Thinkin' some horizontal contractions

    I feel there's a need to balance our

    chemical and physical reactions

    Your joy drug has inflicted me with a

    shot straight to my stimulated heart's passage

    in time…

    I get an adrenaline rush {just to lust} for you

    and only you…

    The steady flow of you injected in

    my system has me sprung and

    oh so high…

    Loving your body

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~over~~&~~over~~& over

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~again~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I've found a repetitious joy

    in you…
     
  2. Afridancr

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    Due to my repetitious injections of your joydrug I...
    ...think...I've....just ...experienced...an

    OVERDOSE OF GQJOY

    *somebodycallthedoctor*
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    YOU are....

    A treat to read; lovin' what you do...

    1 :heart:
     
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    I WUZ wide awake

    getting my pre-dawn read on....

    now you got me dizzy, GQ!

    gots to go back and lie down...all this repetitive rhythm~motion....is workin ...me :)

    thank you, my brotha

    a
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It was the Artist (who was here in Cali last month) who said there was JOY IN REPETITION !!! :cool:


    Thankin' Afri, N2 & Alyce for repeatin' :heart: wit me!

    You guys are mah repetition!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  6. dnommo

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    GQ,

    i don't wanna repeat what everyone has already said BUUUUT, this scribe is tight and seeing how you got all the poettess overdosing on your verbage, i think i shall keep 911 on speed dial...

    just is case

    another tight scribe from one of the true greats...

    :D :toast:
     
  7. Destee

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    aaaawwww GQ ... whew .... man ... so sweet

    your stuff is sooooo sweet

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. blakverb

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    GQ,

    My poetical brother, why you go and do that to the site? this is tight black man, keep representin' for the bros!

    one love,blak
     
  9. Hunter

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    GQ

    This one flowed so smooth in my mind as I read it

    "over and over again"

    Lovin' your style poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ GQ GQ!!!

    SURELY U KNOW WHERE JOY LAY
    AND I'VE JUST BEEN TOOK THERE
    MAN DES BE TYGHT FLOW AS U KNOW
    FLOWHEAD MY BRUTHA..:)