Black Poetry : repeatedly into infinity

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like staring into your brown eyes
    knowing that u r the luv'u'myliif helps make
    this thing we call luv rise to a level of abstract reality
    miles couldn't play the tune of my soul better
    and fashionably, i'm lonely without u
    happy with.
    makin things happen that shouldn't
    or wouldn't otherwise, u complete me
    your light beams down the passage of
    my consciousness and opens a new crevice called
    "sharing-togetherness"
    breif comparisons to the way i was
    makes me realize that no other can compare
    i'm open with u, even though u might not think so
    trust me this time, u got me
    repeatedly into infinity.
    i'm in u.
    we mesh.
    u got me.
    repeatedly into infinity.
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful...

    "and fashionably, i'm lonely without u
    happy with.
    makin things happen that shouldn't
    or wouldn't otherwise, u complete me "

    absolutely gorgeous...
     
  3. Queen_of_Spades

    Queen_of_Spades Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So beautiful and intricate..perhaps one day I will find a love like that...for some reason, love seems to want to be elusive.
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the replies poets.
    LiLi, i really appreciate it. stay in....

    Queen,
    just some imagination stuff u know. off the top of the dome this morning. but thanx nonetheless...

    b.e.z.

    hw
     
  5. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa.


    even tho' i'm just bare-ly speakin' to you...
    i had to speak on this herre peace!! :D

    i loved these lines:
    well done poet... very well done!

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
  6. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx ELAYNE, while u tryin to ackphunny!
    i dug your piece too. get back at me on th IM.

    easy
    hw
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah...this is dope...I like dis...

    1luv
     
  8. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    au'ite 2. thanx to u as well.
    much appreciation

    b.e.z.
    hw
     
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