Black Poetry : Rent Party

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jul 29, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Real life is jumpin'

    At Destee'... ooh!

    Hooked-up in real time

    Got myself together, baby

    Paying rent in rhyme

    RICH, is good people

    DESTEE... is down!

    No matter the weather, hazy

    You're wired with sound

    Y-o-u... Y-o-u...

    Gettin' down!

    Your private message, honey

    Is really the bomb!

    CHAT... CHAT...

    Giving back!!!

    If you a different flava-neighbor

    You're welcomed back... :heart:

    Cause people are dancin'... to

    This family groove!

    Someone got your back, Lovely

    To help thangs go smooth

    Where that Bishop at... Money?

    NO watching this groove!

    The front door is open, baby

    Next issue lets move ~

    Cause ladies are asking...

    For a prize at the door!

    Poetically-speakin'... girl

    Come show us your world :cool:

    Got that poet of the week lady

    Back cutting the rug...

    Her body is movin'... tyte!

    She knows how to flow!

    R-E-N-T...

    Paying rent...

    Two cents and you're in

    Re-leasing this party... baby

    To honor some kin-



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet........this flow was "all that", truly captured the spirit and rhythm of this place.

    Much luv,
    Angeli
     
  3. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte 1poet....
    Feel da love

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was too tyte!...and u mentioned me!lol:D
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was too cute :toast:
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol love it
    :)
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! the blessing of da house party is rented
    u captured da essence of our playground poetically sprayed
    tyte
     
  8. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Wee-wee hours...

    Party On! :toast:
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very cool 1poetsought
    liking this
    Peace
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    you gots da ill
    house party vibe going on dis joint...
    this was phat
    u picked me up
    on dis borin @ss work day
    peace
    khasm
     
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