Black Haiku : rent party - in stages

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  1. deepy

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    cornmeal on the fish
    6 times to wash the collards
    winter setting in

    polish on the floor
    bar is filled with everything
    tatoes boiling up







    stage 3 or 4
     
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    Deepy....just plain awesome s t r e t c h.....



    Clearing the front room
    Don't wanna have folks tripping
    over each other

    Enough beer in here?
    What about the gin and rum?
    Folks expect a drank




    stage 2 or 3
     
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    carpet is covered
    ready for the new tango
    party time is near

    drinks on chill ready
    mixture of great dishies set
    music playin low

    stage 1 or 2
     
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    ambiance flowin
    set the food on the table
    first guest rings the bell

    last minute touches
    awkward talking to just one
    more posse arrives

    stage 5 or 6
     
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    Say what about this?
    We could have a rent party
    Real friends will come out

    I'll get my phonebook
    You get yours, we still have time
    to raise enough funds



    preliminary stages...
     
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    body in low tide
    what to do about the bills
    early morning blues

    radio plays low
    songs of very long ago
    got to beat these ills!



    stage 1 or prologue
     
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    aftermath showtime
    last night tango and slide is
    over now clean up

    head spinning wildly
    floor scared from fancy foot work
    what a hangover

    wakeup~stage
     
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    is that you gempis?
    watz & rich..i knew you'd come
    destee family

    put your coats in there
    l0 dollars in the jar please
    join the par-tee-ing!



    stage 4 or 5
     
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    Where is my money Jar?

    Waking up in the middle of the floor.
    Look across the room it's a open front door.
    Couples sitting in corners.
    Leaning to and fro.
    Did James make his train,
    I passed at three thirty or so. :injured:
    I have to get some rest.
    I'll clean this place up later.
    Everyone you have to go.
    Claiming next time I won't
    drink that much any more. :puke:

    What really what happened...
     
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    Party in full swing
    Folks drankin, eatin, dancin
    Two money jars full

    Old school's in the house
    Graham Central Station's The Jam
    Always loved that joint
     
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