Khasm13 : rena...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    back in da day...in 1993
    this woman named rena i started to see
    we started off spending mad time
    [email protected] near all the time i had that was free
    was spent with she
    because she had the coolest personality
    we would sit up and talk about things
    like how we once kings and queens
    she was 2 years older then me
    in graduate school studing chemistry
    oh how this relationship made my heart sing
    continously i would need more of her presense
    totally captivated by her essence
    totally...
    i mean like no other
    in many of her qualities she reminded me of my mother
    kind, intelligent, caring, outspoken and strong
    4 months we shared good times
    in the grand scheme of things...that wasn't too long
    as the time passed quickly from friends to lovers
    she made me completely forget about the others
    what others?
    then for easter she went home to atlanta
    while i stayed in tallahassee waiting for her infectous banter
    but i never received it again
    she fell asleep at the wheel
    then crashed into a viaduct...putting her brief life to an end
    when her best friend told me about this crying
    it made my head spin....[email protected]
    it's always the good ones that be dying
    at the time...it seemed like God did not want me to win
    happiness...cause eventhough our time was short
    rena tapped into this
    side of me that no one had before seen
    including me
    she always brought out the best in me
    i felt complete basking in we
    i wondered if he(God)
    would ever grant me
    another rena
    because when i thought of her
    my head became dizzy
    man....how do i miss she
    i guess some things in life
    just aren't meant to be...
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, Im diggin this, your right bro, them queens are something else!! make you wanna write.
     
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    First off....sorry for the loss!!!!
    Life is crazy that way.
    I imagine we as brothers come across "rena's" in life
    And lose them for whatever reason.

    Secondly
    DIS OFF THE HOOK
    But then...
    What can u expect from KHASM13 THE GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

    Keep scribin'

    PEACE AND LOVE
    TWISION
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, my brother. I have to admit, it was hard to overcome the sorrow I felt from this to separate it from your quality of writing, which is outstanding. much love to you.
     
  5. Khasm13

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    thanks theone....my brotha, you are so right, they do :)

    twision...thank you for your kind wordz...when i think back i wish it didn't happen that way but such is life...thanks :)

    gempis...yeah, losing people that you care about hits da soul directly...i am just speaking from da soul and i truly appreciate your compliments...if i lived a perfect life, i wouldn't have ish to talk about i guess...smh....thanks again sis
    one love
    khasm
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my...Khasm
    this was so heartwrenching
    I've never experienced loss
    like this...and wouldn't wish it
    on anyone...I must say
    I'm in agreement with Gempis
    it was difficult to separate
    your writing from the sorrow
    in this case...yet...the sorrow wins
    Brother...I'm speechless
    because my heart is in my throat

    Emotive...

    Peace Brother...
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very heartfelt
    my brother sorry for this lost...
    love you
    this was posed so well
    :grouphug:
    Peace Angel
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks sage...this was a dump of my emotions...re-reading it made me sad...but like i always say, everything happens for a reason....thanks sis

    mba...thanks you for your kind words...life goes on...as the world turns...thanks gurl

    one love
    khasm
     
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    only the good die young. it hurts but never question God's plan
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dap'z on the flow my brother u doing the dam thing 4 real. :deal:
     
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