Black Short Stories : Remote Control

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IT REALLY BLOWS ~

    Hosting a hurricane

    My people ain't

    Some kind of

    Weather

    Vain

    Ask...

    Your doctor

    Who's insane

    What else might

    Kill brain cells dead

    Dare not try to use your head

    Lay dumb down and all is grand


    Darryl Abdu Omari :thinking:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ duh
     
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    a remote control?!
    hmmm, that's a gadget
    let me see if i can figure out
    where the bat-trees go
    not there. hmmm. not there
    oh forget it! let me ask the doctor
    about this insanity

    so he said:
    Lady you're not crazy. You just need to lay down dumb
    and stop hosting hurricanes
    cause that man aint from a family of weather vains

    and i said:
    what? weathered veins? look doc all i want to know is where the bat-trees go. and i wrote it down.

    so he said:
    What? What the hell are bat-trees?

    and i said:
    you know...them things you need to host hurricanes.
    you know those little silver round metal thingy
    with little silver bumps on top.
    i think it's called a controlled bloke.
    what's wrong doc? you look a little green.
    i think you better lie down.

    so he said:
    Look lady you're not crazy. All you need
    to do is go tell that man how you feel about him
    and all will be grand.

    and i said:
    that's all i need to do?

    and he said:
    Duh!

    (smile)
     
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    YOU ROCK!
     
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