Black Poetry : REMOTE CONTROL

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 10, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On/off again command of supply and demand
    May make you the wealthiest man in the land
    Commercial enterprise may gas up your ride
    But the matter at hand cost us our lives
    Homelessness puts life on pause
    When pay-per-veiw mutes Santa Claus
    The national debt is a nervous wreck
    Like the cable bill you can't collect
    Now wireless is placing bets...
    Recording those you don't respect
    The media ain't no friend of mine
    Picture kinda dark,
    Once you hit rewind ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :hearthis:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. Blkthunder

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    I rewind it hits my mind
    my peoples are third eye blind
    nothing but a sequel
    my peoples not equal


    Goodstuff
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet, this made me think of how the quickness of the remote makes true events seem fake, like they all run together like some music video or something...Anywho, flow on with your thought provoking drops.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a true message inside this flow a remote can flick reality into a myth
    flow on bruh !
     
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    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    something to ponder... hmmm I like dat... very nice... Ms J
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where's the remote

    :thanks: ;)
     
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    i liked this ... :picture: On the spot....



    No remote controle...

    no...
    making us quick bold...

    let me have a talk
    with the old... giving us wisdom growth..


    give me 100 grey hairs but with a life lived in truth Gold..

    than 80 hair black...lived as a mummy soled







    LoveLibertylady:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i have it but no batteries
     
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    That's alright $$RICH$$, you got da juice ~
     
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